A review by bekrecka
The Frozen Sky by Jeff Carlson

2.0

Meh. It was a really interesting story...but it needed to be longer. Cramming so much into a short story made it confusing. By the time I understood what was happening, it was over. It would be awesome with more character development and back story to it. In my opinion, the story has great potential. I wish the author wouldn't have done it as a short. It feels very thrown together... I felt more like I was reading an excerpt of a really great book, than the whole story itself. Sad day.