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A review by yesididbringabook
Hard Fall by Sara Ney
2.0
Oh boyo.
There were some logistical issues I had, but I like the general story. Unfortunately, many of the problems were v similar to the last book, which is annoying.
Recommended for: fun and cute main guy/don't care about the girl, like sports but don't know much
1. This is nitpicky, but it's the same crap from the last book. If you don't know a topic, find a beta reader who does to fix this stuff. *Baseball doesn't have bye weeks-that's football. Baseball has occasional off days. *Baseball players absolutely take steroids. THERE IS LITERALLY A "ROID ERA" IN BASEBALL. HAVE YOU HEARD OF BARRY BONDS? And another baseball player would know why he would use steroids! To hit bombs. Ugh. Stuff like that pulls you out of a story.
2. I like the brothers. I want more of them, and less of the annoying stuff.
There were some logistical issues I had, but I like the general story. Unfortunately, many of the problems were v similar to the last book, which is annoying.
Recommended for: fun and cute main guy/don't care about the girl, like sports but don't know much
1. This is nitpicky, but it's the same crap from the last book. If you don't know a topic, find a beta reader who does to fix this stuff. *Baseball doesn't have bye weeks-that's football. Baseball has occasional off days. *Baseball players absolutely take steroids. THERE IS LITERALLY A "ROID ERA" IN BASEBALL. HAVE YOU HEARD OF BARRY BONDS? And another baseball player would know why he would use steroids! To hit bombs. Ugh. Stuff like that pulls you out of a story.
2. I like the brothers. I want more of them, and less of the annoying stuff.