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A review by jodyladuemcgrath
Ancient Magic by Linsey Hall
2.0
Editor Needed
The plot and characters of this book were okay. They were all very Mary Sue, but likable. The world was interesting and I liked the idea of Fire Souls. The biggest thing needed was an editor to smooth the edges of the story and make it not seem so step by step. My biggest complaint was that colors kept changing. One sentence had Nix with green eyes, then a couple paragraphs later they were brown. One sentence said Nix’s hair was a crimson wave, then it was black. It really jerked you out of the story. So annoying! I probably won’t go on to the next one. It was way to G-rated for me.
The plot and characters of this book were okay. They were all very Mary Sue, but likable. The world was interesting and I liked the idea of Fire Souls. The biggest thing needed was an editor to smooth the edges of the story and make it not seem so step by step. My biggest complaint was that colors kept changing. One sentence had Nix with green eyes, then a couple paragraphs later they were brown. One sentence said Nix’s hair was a crimson wave, then it was black. It really jerked you out of the story. So annoying! I probably won’t go on to the next one. It was way to G-rated for me.