A review by prgchrqltma
Dawn's Early Light by Pip Ballantine, Tee Morris

4.0

I love these stories, but the improper word usage and/or spelling issues take me right out of the experience. For example, one does not collapse onto a "chez lounge." And one certainly does not "surmise" a room. These problems were so obvious in the first book, that my first assumption was that it was written in another language and badly translated.

A proper job of editing would take care of this, I think.