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A review by dani794
Sunburn by Chloe Michelle Howarth
3.75
“This Summer is breaking my heart into pieces, to reveal a new and better heart that only beats for her.”
the story was really nice and heartbreaking.
i had an issue with the prose, it felt very “tell not show” and i felt like i didn’t work too hard since a majority of things were told to me. But there were some moments that were written very poetically that they were emotional to read.
Poor Martin 😭
The obsession with spit and the part where Susannah was obsessed with the dirt under Lucy’s nails that she was biting out was ???? uhhh…
I mean you do you.
the story was really nice and heartbreaking.
i had an issue with the prose, it felt very “tell not show” and i felt like i didn’t work too hard since a majority of things were told to me. But there were some moments that were written very poetically that they were emotional to read.
Poor Martin 😭
The obsession with spit and the part where Susannah was obsessed with the dirt under Lucy’s nails that she was biting out was ???? uhhh…
I mean you do you.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Homophobia, Infidelity, Religious bigotry, and Lesbophobia
Moderate: Eating disorder and Emotional abuse