A review by displacedcactus
The Undetectables by Courtney Smyth
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
This could have been a perfectly OK debut novel except the main character did something crappy for a crappy reason which I found pretty unforgiveable and her friend who she did it to completely forgave her without even a proper grovel.
Spoilers ahoy!
Due to a chronic pain condition, the MC has been kind of left behind by her friends, and one night she's holding the queen of her friend's beloved magic beetle colony and the beetle bites her, and she SQUISHES THE BEETLE QUEEN which causes the rest of the beetles to go into a frenzy, killing each other, and the survivors go dormant waiting for a new queen to emerge. It takes her DAYS to confess to doing this, at which point her friend was all "Oh I already knew you did it because of how sad and guilty you looked anytime someone mentioned the beetles, and I understand you did it because Other Friend and I went to a concert without you, it's ok, I forgive you." And I was like "DOUBLE YOU TEE EFF in what world is it ok to KILL SOMEONE'S PET because you're sad your friends have fun without you?"
Like seriously. If Mallory had killed a cat or a dog, no reader would forgive that. But because it's "just a bug" it's ok? But it's not ok. It wouldn't be OK if someone was upset at being left out by their friends and smashed one friend's car up, or destroyed their favorite sweater or deleted their video game file, let alone killing an important if miniscule living creature, causing serious damage to that creature's colony.
I almost DNFed right when the beetle squishing happened, but I kept reading, because the way it was written with a bit of distance, I almost thought that it would come out that some magic was making her extra volatile, but no. We're never given a satisfying reason beyond "I was pain and my life sucks and my friends have fun without me and this tiny animal did me a tiny hurt so I killed it."
Spoilers ahoy!
Like seriously. If Mallory had killed a cat or a dog, no reader would forgive that. But because it's "just a bug" it's ok? But it's not ok. It wouldn't be OK if someone was upset at being left out by their friends and smashed one friend's car up, or destroyed their favorite sweater or deleted their video game file, let alone killing an important if miniscule living creature, causing serious damage to that creature's colony.
I almost DNFed right when the beetle squishing happened, but I kept reading, because the way it was written with a bit of distance, I almost thought that it would come out that some magic was making her extra volatile, but no. We're never given a satisfying reason beyond "I was pain and my life sucks and my friends have fun without me and this tiny animal did me a tiny hurt so I killed it."
Content Warnings
Graphic: Injury/Injury detail, Violence, Death, Animal death, and Chronic illness
Moderate: Cursing