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A review by terrenmdean
Paradise by J.A. Low
4.0
Good story but...
It's a good story, but there is some mistakes in it. There's a lot of punctuation issues, and sometimes it is hard to figure out who is saying what. It's a good story but it just should of been looked over again before publishing
It's a good story, but there is some mistakes in it. There's a lot of punctuation issues, and sometimes it is hard to figure out who is saying what. It's a good story but it just should of been looked over again before publishing