A review by heartstrings
A Deeper Blue by S.E. Harmon

challenging medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

1.0

Wow what a frustrating read. Harmon’s writing is sharp and precise as usual, as well as being both appropriately witty and touching. But it’s the evolution of Blue and Kelly’s relationship in this sequel that I found most irritating. As a couple they don’t really seem to grow that much throughout the book. Even while they deal with what to do about Blue coming out or not, nothing about their relationship feels at risk. And I get that they’re solid, they’re in love, and that’s not changing, but even with the foundation of their relationship being grounded, there didn’t seem to be much at stake with them, even as they fought, even as Blue lost some of his family. It all felt too easy.

The one thing that probably turned me off the most about this sequel was the development of their sexual relationship. At times it seemed Harmon wrote things to be subversive for the sake of being subversive more than because it fit organically with the characters. 

Also, Kelly being comfortable with himself and his sexuality and yet acting offended by being referred to as a WAG, like this feminine term is dirty, was also incredibly off-putting for several reasons.

Ultimately I really wanted to like this book, I’d been looking forward to the sequel for months, but I really didn’t. And it’s disappointing to know I’ll have to be more selective and cautious when considering reading Harmon’s books in the future.
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