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A review by itsjusttrish
Fight by Jenn Bullard
Did not finish book. Stopped at 60%.
I just cannot make myself finish this. First of all there's a graphic(ish) SA scene for literally no reason. It brings no character growth, it doesn't set our FMC into a personal arch- it merely is a tool to get the MMC to meet the FMC. Who magically has very little set backs due to be assaulted- she is deeply traumatized by her mother's past... which is.. something ig.
The MMC are advertised as morally grey and said to have their "instincts riding them hard" but half way in they still has her kidnapped and chained to a bed. Once she escapes and stands up for herself even more then their instincts back off enough to not imprison her?
Then you got the pacing issue and for fuck sake dude this BOOK IS SLOW. 50% in and she's still chained to the damn bed. We spend at least a chapter on her kidnapping and assault. She has almost no time to get to know her beta before bedding him. It's a mess. The whole book. Which is disappointing because I like the FMC a lot.
The MMC are advertised as morally grey and said to have their "instincts riding them hard" but half way in they still has her kidnapped and chained to a bed. Once she escapes and stands up for herself even more then their instincts back off enough to not imprison her?
Then you got the pacing issue and for fuck sake dude this BOOK IS SLOW. 50% in and she's still chained to the damn bed. We spend at least a chapter on her kidnapping and assault. She has almost no time to get to know her beta before bedding him. It's a mess. The whole book. Which is disappointing because I like the FMC a lot.