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A review by tashva
The Grace Year by Kim Liggett
2.0
Okay. I am so sick of bad editing. The story had good bones, a solid idea. And then the macro editor or whomever did a shit job of making the story make sense. The timeline is WAY screwed up. There's not enough description of how terrible things actually are. The main character flip flops back and forth about who she is (so desperate she tries to kill herself; next page, she would never do that, she's too strong). There's a good story in here somewhere, but this is like a first draft story outline.