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A review by koops333
Waking Magic by Martha Carr, Michael Anderle
DNF 5%
The writing is all over the place weaving from one persons perspective to another w/o really delineating who is talking or separating the perspectives.
At one point we're reading about the police partner liking that the h pretty much shoots first and asks questions later....yeeaaah....yikes.
Then two pages later the h was suddenly talking and asking another officers to bounce the suspects head off the back seat of the patrol car after she kicked him in the gut for saying a rude comment. (Yeah he shot your partner, but he was already in cuffs detective.)
Then oop the elves are talking now?...I...okay.
Wasn't liking the h enough already to continue with the writing style. Not for moi.
The writing is all over the place weaving from one persons perspective to another w/o really delineating who is talking or separating the perspectives.
At one point we're reading about the police partner liking that the h pretty much shoots first and asks questions later....yeeaaah....yikes.
Then two pages later the h was suddenly talking and asking another officers to bounce the suspects head off the back seat of the patrol car after she kicked him in the gut for saying a rude comment. (Yeah he shot your partner, but he was already in cuffs detective.)
Then oop the elves are talking now?...I...okay.
Wasn't liking the h enough already to continue with the writing style. Not for moi.