A review by pizzamyheart
One Too Many by Jade West

dark emotional mysterious sad tense slow-paced

• Plot- or character-driven? Character

1.5

This was.... long. Overcomplicated. Poor edited. Strange twist. 

The smut was strong but once you get to the reveal its off-putting. Also the reveal was confusing.

arent they half brothers of they have the se dad amd look alike?? They keep saying step brother. Did i miss something?