A review by alyssalee2022
Walking Naked by Alyssa Brugman

challenging fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

0.5

This book was SO bad. 

I wanna preface his with I like YA and even middle grade books. I can appreciate books that weren't written for my age group, or have a more simplified message for younger readers. This book covers a hard topic, an important topic for a younger audience. However, it was done well beyond poorly. The characters are shallow and bitchy from beginning to end, and
Spoiler Megan makes Perdita's suicide about herself, which I feel is completely the opposite of the message!
. If your book is meant to be about character development, then develop the characters!

I'm also surprised that the author has a degree from a pretty good university and can include such lovely poetry in her book when the writing is just so, <I>so</I> bad. It's awful. My seven year old stepson strings together better sentences than that. I've read some middle grade and YA with stunning prose, even with simplified language for a younger audience. This book, it's writing, and its message are worse than shallow and simplified. Truly atrocious. 

If this book wasn't only 200 pages and took me all of 2 hours to read, I would have DNFed. To be honest, I really should have. 

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