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A review by words_i_read
Playing the Lines by J. Colby
2.0
I do not even know how to rate it, because the only thing I've been thinking while reading it, is: "I'm sure I've read that before!"
Is it based on fanfiction maybe?
It's driving me mad!
Anyways it's heavy on inner monologue of one of the MCs. So much so that it makes it hard to read.
It kind of goes like this:
MC1: "Question?"
Inner monologue for one page.
MC2: "Answer and maybe another question?"
Another inner monologue for at least half a page.
Sometimes I forgot there was even some dialogue and had to look back up to reread.
It got dull really quickly and made me sort of skip-rush-read some parts.
Is it based on fanfiction maybe?
It's driving me mad!
Anyways it's heavy on inner monologue of one of the MCs. So much so that it makes it hard to read.
It kind of goes like this:
MC1: "Question?"
Inner monologue for one page.
MC2: "Answer and maybe another question?"
Another inner monologue for at least half a page.
Sometimes I forgot there was even some dialogue and had to look back up to reread.
It got dull really quickly and made me sort of skip-rush-read some parts.