A review by offictionandfantasy
Watched by Cindy M. Hogan
2.0
I met the author of this at the store and decided to read this.
The book needs another run through for grammar errors. There were so many sentences where a character was talking and there was no ending quotation mark and so on. It was confusing and stopped me from actually getting into the book.
It also bugged me with the way the love triangle was handled. Does every Utah book have to be like Twilight?
Also, this girl hates herself pretty much, but is like, "Oh my speeches are flawless I'm so perfect when speeching everyone loves me~"
No. Just... No.
The book needs another run through for grammar errors. There were so many sentences where a character was talking and there was no ending quotation mark and so on. It was confusing and stopped me from actually getting into the book.
It also bugged me with the way the love triangle was handled. Does every Utah book have to be like Twilight?
Also, this girl hates herself pretty much, but is like, "Oh my speeches are flawless I'm so perfect when speeching everyone loves me~"
No. Just... No.