A review by lermonysnickers
The Octunnumi Fosbit Files Prologue by Trevor Alan Foris

challenging mysterious slow-paced

• Plot- or character-driven? Plot
• Strong character development? No
• Loveable characters? No
• Diverse cast of characters? No
• Flaws of characters a main focus? No

1.0

This book look cool and the design was gorgeous, but if the prologue to your story is an entire book long, you're doing something wrong. Nothing happens, nothing is pronouncable even with the pronunciation guide, and the characters are just flat out annoying. It was a neat idea, it just doesn't work.