A review by 33p3barpercent
Undescribable by Shantel Tessier
3.0
I did finish this novel, so it wasn't TERRIBLE or anything (god knows I've read worse), but I still had a lot of issues with it.
-Needs some serious editing. This story could have been half the length it is.
-Sam drove me absolutely bonkers. "If I tell him I love him, he'll leave." For no reason. I didn't understand her reasoning at all.
-Slade has a complete personality transplant. I understand the "I've found the one so I won't be a giant horndog" mentality, but the fact that he becomes a completely different person who loves to be all lovey dovey and overprotective? No. It doesn't flip that quickly.
Not horrible, but others have written this same story better.
-Needs some serious editing. This story could have been half the length it is.
-Sam drove me absolutely bonkers. "If I tell him I love him, he'll leave." For no reason. I didn't understand her reasoning at all.
-Slade has a complete personality transplant. I understand the "I've found the one so I won't be a giant horndog" mentality, but the fact that he becomes a completely different person who loves to be all lovey dovey and overprotective? No. It doesn't flip that quickly.
Not horrible, but others have written this same story better.