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A review by chopprjock
The Legion and the Lioness by Robert D. Armstrong, R.D. Armstrong
2.0
Decent premise, marred by the author’s lack of craft
A good story and a well conceived plot. But the author could have used a few more revisions and/or edits to clean up the stilted dialogue and jerky scenes.
A good story and a well conceived plot. But the author could have used a few more revisions and/or edits to clean up the stilted dialogue and jerky scenes.