A review by ahoke1990
Alfred Kropp: The Thirteenth Skull by Rick Yancey
3.0
So Alfred gets one more unplanned adventure. Alfred has a very special gift inside him. Everyone wants this gift,they want what he has. They want the Seal and Excalibur. All these important artifacts and more secrets. They literly want to extract the secrets of Alfred.
*why do authors write about peeing? I know everyone does. Even fictional people have to pee.
They just jump all over locations. So there isn't a sense of one location. I feel like pacing is in the middle of fast and slow. Alfredds action s are believable because he just wants to do the right thing. He never asked to be sucked in. He didn't even know he had a destiny. The dialogue feels too much back and forth to me. Most dialogues feel like actual talking.
I thought there was another item to discover but there wasn't. I've already read most of Rick Yanceys books so I know what his writing is like. The ending makes me feel like there could be more to the series.
*why do authors write about peeing? I know everyone does. Even fictional people have to pee.
They just jump all over locations. So there isn't a sense of one location. I feel like pacing is in the middle of fast and slow. Alfredds action s are believable because he just wants to do the right thing. He never asked to be sucked in. He didn't even know he had a destiny. The dialogue feels too much back and forth to me. Most dialogues feel like actual talking.
I thought there was another item to discover but there wasn't. I've already read most of Rick Yanceys books so I know what his writing is like. The ending makes me feel like there could be more to the series.