A review by lsoccer12
The Storyspinner by Becky Wallace

3.0

THIS BOOK HAD SO MUCH POTENTIAL.

Gah.

Jumbled thoughts to accompany the similar feel of the book:
"Wait, so there's two kingdoms?"
"So they have magic.....?"
"Wow the protagonist is freaking awesome."
"Why are there alternating storylines? I honestly cannot be invested in both right now."

Perhaps the sequel will be better developed.