A review by mikaiten
The Steele Wolf by Chanda Hahn

2.0

The story is intriguing but the writing is absolutely horrible. If the characters were consistent I might have been less harsh, but all the characters seem to be suffering from bipolar disorder. Within a few sentences they go from happy to mad to sad to confused, and none of them can focus on anything for more than five seconds. After learning major plot points Thalia gets distracted by the most mundane things. She refuses to tell anyone about the important things she discovers, and is constantly confused by why no one is around to help her when she fails to let them know she's planning to do something stupid and dangerous. I really want to like these books, because I think the story has merit. I just wish an editor would go through these and point out the inconsistencies before the third book comes out.