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A review by sangloup
Dark Season: The Complete First Series by Amy Cross
3.0
Extra book #76... not of the EBN Challenge.
Ok... so I forgot to add this book after I finished it.
I enjoyed the storyline in this book, but the grammer and other basic errors were quite a bit to handle.
Missing letters, mixed up pronouns, using the wrong names, and using words that didn't fit in the sentence or dropping words completely really distracted me from the story.
Sophie Hart and Patrick... a kind of romeo and juliette in the paranormal world. It was a good base for a great story. I just felt it needed more... and an editor/proofreader.
Ok... so I forgot to add this book after I finished it.
I enjoyed the storyline in this book, but the grammer and other basic errors were quite a bit to handle.
Missing letters, mixed up pronouns, using the wrong names, and using words that didn't fit in the sentence or dropping words completely really distracted me from the story.
Sophie Hart and Patrick... a kind of romeo and juliette in the paranormal world. It was a good base for a great story. I just felt it needed more... and an editor/proofreader.