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A review by chelle_la_belle
Broken Hart by Ella Fox
1.0
Description:
Sabrina Tyler is head over heels in love with her boss and best friend, Dante Hart. She thinks that Dante has no romantic interest in her but she's wrong.
Dante doesn't believe in love or commitment or any kind. Sabrina has gotten under his skin, but Dante has no intention of acting on it.
One wild night changes their relationship forever, but Dante lacks faith in love and doesn't believe in Happily Ever Afters.
My Thoughts:
Warning this review is going to be a rant review
First thing first, this book has a ton of sex scenes! Like holy s**t. I've never read so many sex scenes in a book. I'm talking two or more per chapter and the chapters are really short! Every Time i was like
In the end the sex scenes really took away from the story and character development. ALSO if you are going to publish your book whether it be self published or professionally published
CHECK FOR SPELLING AND GRAMMAR MISTAKES! I saw at least two or three...For example in Page 5 when Sabrina describes getting the job with Dante Ella writes "I was thrilled when i was got the job". Then she goes on to page 12 and writes " They doesn't do it in-front of me and the girls" and continues on to page 13 with " I blow my hair dry".
One last thing to mention...our two main characters. Sabrina how oblivious do you have to be to see if someone likes or loves you...like i get not picking it up right away but damn!
Anyway that's it for this review. I will not be picking up anything else by this author. Let me know if you've read this book and what you thought about it. :)
My Blog:http://witchybooks.tumblr.com/
Sabrina Tyler is head over heels in love with her boss and best friend, Dante Hart. She thinks that Dante has no romantic interest in her but she's wrong.
Dante doesn't believe in love or commitment or any kind. Sabrina has gotten under his skin, but Dante has no intention of acting on it.
One wild night changes their relationship forever, but Dante lacks faith in love and doesn't believe in Happily Ever Afters.
My Thoughts:
Warning this review is going to be a rant review
First thing first, this book has a ton of sex scenes! Like holy s**t. I've never read so many sex scenes in a book. I'm talking two or more per chapter and the chapters are really short! Every Time i was like
In the end the sex scenes really took away from the story and character development. ALSO if you are going to publish your book whether it be self published or professionally published
CHECK FOR SPELLING AND GRAMMAR MISTAKES! I saw at least two or three...For example in Page 5 when Sabrina describes getting the job with Dante Ella writes "I was thrilled when i was got the job". Then she goes on to page 12 and writes " They doesn't do it in-front of me and the girls" and continues on to page 13 with " I blow my hair dry".
One last thing to mention...our two main characters. Sabrina how oblivious do you have to be to see if someone likes or loves you...like i get not picking it up right away but damn!
Anyway that's it for this review. I will not be picking up anything else by this author. Let me know if you've read this book and what you thought about it. :)
My Blog:http://witchybooks.tumblr.com/