A review by morebedsidebooks
Initiation: Sex Wizards, Book 1 by Alethea Faust

3.0

 “I don’t understand it, but somehow, we’ve made magic.” 

 
Initiation by Alethea Faust is the first volume of an erotic fantasy series pitched as if Harry Potter was gayer, not transphobic, and full of kinky sex featuring emotionally mature adults. 

From a rural mountain village Dominai (pansexual) never expected he’d have magic in his lineage when it’s the purview of the wealthy. Or go to Crux, the centre of magical study in the kingdom. He still can’t seem to believe he belongs in the wizards’ towers. Even as a complete novice he shows more and more talent, open and willing to try anything twice. 

Focusing on risk-aware kink, consent is a pillar of the magic system’s foundation. However, this isn’t an ideal world. Characters run afoul, make errors or questionable decisions. From the start the personalities are very human, even if some of the characters are not. I rather love how Dominai doesn’t let his anxiety disorder hold him back from experimenting. Though, he does need to seriously figure out and express his limits. 

Faust most cleverly integrates content warnings, veiling them in descriptions regarding the schools of magic and casting methods following the chapters titles. I really appreciate the detailed breakdown. Though it unfortunately leaves something to be desired. Information presented only at the chapter mark does prevent a potential reader when initially browsing from having the full content list before purchasing. (The book preview available online does not show a full CW as otherwise claimed.) If an author is hesitant because retailers can be fickle and arbitrary about CW and content guidelines, CW could also be put somewhere else. Authors choose personal websites, social cataloging websites, etc. I check multiple places when researching a book. So, besides my own notes, I made the decision to copy out the chapter descriptions for the content section below. 

Once a reader can open up Initiation, well… First there were a few instances of content I would have offered a note for that the author doesn’t (see below). Then there are repeated references to Enchantment, one school of magic, first being worked in chapter four. Yet, what this school entails isn’t part of the chapter description. Context is instead piecemealed in the text up till the last chapter devoted to Enchantment where the description occurs. Too in particular, around 60% into the book there is a shift with a subplot coming to the forefront involving kidnapping, abuse, torture, sexual assault and rape. There’s a lot of possibility to explore these subjects, justice, survivorship, and these characters’ relationship with plus the potential of BDSM. However, Dominai’s perspective, despite being close to two of the wizards affected, barely provides such in the pages of the first volume. Plus, not just regarding trauma, while there are physical methods for healing described, the emotional care available is unclear. Which is honestly disappointing because aspects then come off as shallow. I do not believe that was the intention. But there’s a disconnect. 

Know if a reader decides to skip over chapter(s), it will depend if that works so well because each can naturally build on another some more so than others. Unfortunately picking up book two, Mastery, again leaves largely the same questions until it is in one’s hands. (Since I did later get book two, which is longer, know there is a whole thread near throughout about trauma.) 

All in all, I really love many of the ideas Faust makes use of in this first book. Yet the execution does leave one wanting, in the wrong way, with this debut novel. 

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