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A review by indiab202
Fella Enchanted by S.O. Callahan
Did not finish book. Stopped at 11%.
DNF @ 11%.
I received this ebook in a Goodreads giveaway. The description and title were what made me interested in this book and I wish I could have experienced more of the plot before deciding on a rating, but unfortunately I couldn’t keep going.
The writing style was highly distracting. Specifically, when I started counting how many times a sentence started with ‘I’, ‘I’m’, ‘As I…’, etc, I knew I couldn’t continue with this book. Yes, this is written in first person, but there a plenty of first person perspective books that use more variety in sentence structure. I think with constructive feedback, and further growth in skill, this could be better.
I received this ebook in a Goodreads giveaway. The description and title were what made me interested in this book and I wish I could have experienced more of the plot before deciding on a rating, but unfortunately I couldn’t keep going.
The writing style was highly distracting. Specifically, when I started counting how many times a sentence started with ‘I’, ‘I’m’, ‘As I…’, etc, I knew I couldn’t continue with this book. Yes, this is written in first person, but there a plenty of first person perspective books that use more variety in sentence structure. I think with constructive feedback, and further growth in skill, this could be better.