A review by evil_jj
Dominion by Nicholas Bella
2.0
1.5 stars
The overall story isn't bad, but the writing leaves a lot to be desired. There's needless repetition of concepts, and it states the obvious entirely too often. The thing that bugged me the most, though, was the frequently shifting perspectives with no warning. It was so jarring to hop from the mind of one character to 2 or more others then back to the original in just a few pages. Apparently the next book has instalove, so I'm giving up on this series.
The overall story isn't bad, but the writing leaves a lot to be desired. There's needless repetition of concepts, and it states the obvious entirely too often. The thing that bugged me the most, though, was the frequently shifting perspectives with no warning. It was so jarring to hop from the mind of one character to 2 or more others then back to the original in just a few pages. Apparently the next book has instalove, so I'm giving up on this series.