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A review by valhecka
Spirits That Walk in Shadow by Nina Kiriki Hoffman
1.0
OH MY GOD NEITHER OF THEM ARE ACTING LIKE HUMANS and the dialogue is KILLING ME. Whyyy.
end: So every character was exactly the same, just with different names and occasionally a shout-out to their assigned personality trait. A lot of telling and not showing, a lot of crappy dialogue that no one would actually say, a lot of lip service to The College Process, exactly five curse words for that bit of oh-so-careless edge, and entirely too much wiftiness.
All in all, fail. Not sure I want to touch the rest of her stuff now.
end: So every character was exactly the same, just with different names and occasionally a shout-out to their assigned personality trait. A lot of telling and not showing, a lot of crappy dialogue that no one would actually say, a lot of lip service to The College Process, exactly five curse words for that bit of oh-so-careless edge, and entirely too much wiftiness.
All in all, fail. Not sure I want to touch the rest of her stuff now.