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A review by jennas8
Spark of the Everflame by Penn Cole
4.0
Some wonderful world building here, and a great start to a series!
The writing is good, but Diem isn’t the sharpest tool in the shed. Her actions would be a lot more believable if she were supposed to be 16 instead of 20.
I know the author made Diem be 20 years old so there would be spice, but Diem’s decision-making skills are truly those of a young teenager.
Note to fantasy romance authors: I know you’re getting a ton of pressure to put spice in your books, but please make your characters appropriately mature for the age they’re supposed to be.
The writing is good, but Diem isn’t the sharpest tool in the shed. Her actions would be a lot more believable if she were supposed to be 16 instead of 20.
I know the author made Diem be 20 years old so there would be spice, but Diem’s decision-making skills are truly those of a young teenager.
Note to fantasy romance authors: I know you’re getting a ton of pressure to put spice in your books, but please make your characters appropriately mature for the age they’re supposed to be.