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A review by courtney_wallmqt
Promises and Pomegranates by Sav R. Miller
Did not finish book. Stopped at 52%.
No wonder the book is self published. No coherent editor or publisher would produce this book. There is literally no plot. The characters are hypocritical to what they are described of being. The “plot” holes are craters. The age gap doesn’t fit. The writing is awful- everything is so dramatic: “My knuckles turn white on the bannister from my grip as I walk up the stairs.” Insert eye roll.
The FMC is drugged, she walks 3 blocks down from the bar where the MMC left her (completely random btw) and he can’t find her sitting outside a bus station bench? The MMC holds a grudge because he had sex with the FMC mom and it went sour. He “watched her grow up.” But he is 32 and she is 18?
This book is just bad in so many ways. I gave it a good 200 pages and got absolutely nothing out of it. The attempt of writing a mafia dark romance comes off as a cheap fan fic the author wrote on her journal. Hard pass.
The FMC is drugged, she walks 3 blocks down from the bar where the MMC left her (completely random btw) and he can’t find her sitting outside a bus station bench? The MMC holds a grudge because he had sex with the FMC mom and it went sour. He “watched her grow up.” But he is 32 and she is 18?
This book is just bad in so many ways. I gave it a good 200 pages and got absolutely nothing out of it. The attempt of writing a mafia dark romance comes off as a cheap fan fic the author wrote on her journal. Hard pass.