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A review by kb33
The Protector by Morgan Elizabeth
DNF at 62%. I put it aside for a day and don’t care to go back to it.
This is so strange. I get the feeling that this used to be a book about police officers, but they used a program to remove the words “police” and “officer” and changed it to private detective, without actually changing any other part of the story, including the red and blue flashing lights on the car... And neither scenario works. If they’re private detectives, not once does anyone ever talk to the police, who are the ones who would need the info to eventually have the stalker charged. And how would a private detective agency financially survive in a small town? If they’re police, they never learned procedures like not fucking up a crime scene.
Tony victim blaming the shit out of Luna in the beginning pissed me off. Not sure he ever redeemed himself there.
Also, hire an editor. Sooo many grammar issues, and sometimes popular sayings are used in a way that tells us that the author doesn’t actually know what they mean.
This is so strange. I get the feeling that this used to be a book about police officers, but they used a program to remove the words “police” and “officer” and changed it to private detective, without actually changing any other part of the story, including the red and blue flashing lights on the car... And neither scenario works. If they’re private detectives, not once does anyone ever talk to the police, who are the ones who would need the info to eventually have the stalker charged. And how would a private detective agency financially survive in a small town? If they’re police, they never learned procedures like not fucking up a crime scene.
Tony victim blaming the shit out of Luna in the beginning pissed me off. Not sure he ever redeemed himself there.
Also, hire an editor. Sooo many grammar issues, and sometimes popular sayings are used in a way that tells us that the author doesn’t actually know what they mean.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Sexual content
Moderate: Stalking