A review by smitchy
The Bit In Between by Claire Varley

2.0

This book was easy to read. I really liked Varley's writing style. I could sympathise to an extent with the character's lack of purpose & feeling that everyone else has life sorted (I still feel that way).

It would make a great switch the brain off book to read on holiday but here are the issues I had with it:

1) The three main male characters (Oliver, Rick & Ed) were all completely self involved wankers. Seriously, why is she having a dilemma over Ed? He might be good looking but every time he opens his mouth I want to either laugh at him or slap him. Oliver is hardly any better and the sections of his "writing" sound like a bad historical romance.

2) The little interludes where we learn the back story of every minor character we come across - is this to tempt us with the far more interesting stories we could have read? And also all but one of these stories was either depressing &/or tragic - is the point to show us everyone regrets things / has disappointments?

3)The whole magic / story affecting life plot point. Why? Just Why? I can accept this in YA to an extent, but this just seems lazy.

4)The ending.