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A review by tanyarobinson
A Willow Creek Christmas by Lily Graison
3.0
It has become an annual tradition for me to read a cheesy holiday romance each Christmas season, and A Willow Creek Christmas was this year's selection. The emotions were well written, and the sex was not too over the top for me. The characters were likable, if a bit predictable. But Lily Graison is in dire need of an editor. I know I am anal about apostrophes, but I bet there were at least 100 instances of plurals with apostrophes and possessives without. Homonyms were another problem: bare instead of bear is an improper substitution I specifically remember. At one point she wrote that someone "sung" a song (please, it's either "sang" or "had sung"). Anyway, all these errors were a big distraction for me, and could be easily corrected. I just don't understand publishing an ebook before fixing such obvious problems!