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A review by kazhe
Painting Gluttony by Erin Coal
1.0
I AM HATING IN THIS ENTIRE REVIEW, BUT REGARDLESS
Thank you to Erin Coal and Book Sirens for the advanced reader copy
I tried to like this, but the romance was too fast-paced. It was like 20% in, and they already seemed in love. That isn't a problem; the main problem was the wording. Tell me why they used BIOLOGICAL terms to describe their body parts during *the scenes* ''clitoris'' ''Labia,'' Like kill me. Also, I thought we as the book community, also agreed to stop using the word ''Member'' but you know that adds to the list of cringe for me. ''sweet nectar'' Dear god, please stop, the way my face showed pure agony,,,, was enough for anyone else in the room to probably since I wasn't enjoying this book. ''Womanhood'' do I even need to explain? also, this man was crying, growling, whispering and BREATHING for the word ''Mine'' This man was exclaiming, question marking and the way ''Mine'' was thrown into every other scene was like were experimenting was ''How many different ways can I put the word mine in my book?'' Also, I'm so sorry, but I imagined the MMC screaming like a child whenever dialogue like this appeared ''Mine!'' He cried He cried? Why'd you take his toys away from him or alternatively ''Mine!'' He growled Girl bye, someone give him his toys and let roleplay.
Thank you to Erin Coal and Book Sirens for the advanced reader copy
I tried to like this, but the romance was too fast-paced. It was like 20% in, and they already seemed in love. That isn't a problem; the main problem was the wording. Tell me why they used BIOLOGICAL terms to describe their body parts during *the scenes* ''clitoris'' ''Labia,'' Like kill me. Also, I thought we as the book community, also agreed to stop using the word ''Member'' but you know that adds to the list of cringe for me. ''sweet nectar'' Dear god, please stop, the way my face showed pure agony,,,, was enough for anyone else in the room to probably since I wasn't enjoying this book. ''Womanhood'' do I even need to explain? also, this man was crying, growling, whispering and BREATHING for the word ''Mine'' This man was exclaiming, question marking and the way ''Mine'' was thrown into every other scene was like were experimenting was ''How many different ways can I put the word mine in my book?'' Also, I'm so sorry, but I imagined the MMC screaming like a child whenever dialogue like this appeared ''Mine!'' He cried He cried? Why'd you take his toys away from him or alternatively ''Mine!'' He growled Girl bye, someone give him his toys and let roleplay.