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A review by besta3
Anchor of Secrets by Tessa Hale
2.0
“My old man is a narcissist”. Let’s not use disorders like this, thanks. Luckily so far this has only happened once, and as many people don’t know it’s a disorder, I’m willing to keep reading past it.
The author seems to hate using “I” there’s many spots where the characters are speaking where “I” should be included, I understand not wanting tons of I’s in a story, however I would’ve preferred the I’s. The writing just seems.. off without them. Childish, maybe? if you’re so worried, re-word the dialogue to not need them, cut sentences/dialogue, or change other sentences to not need them so the dialogue can have them.
The author seems to hate using “I” there’s many spots where the characters are speaking where “I” should be included, I understand not wanting tons of I’s in a story, however I would’ve preferred the I’s. The writing just seems.. off without them. Childish, maybe? if you’re so worried, re-word the dialogue to not need them, cut sentences/dialogue, or change other sentences to not need them so the dialogue can have them.
Content Warnings
Moderate: Child abuse, Physical abuse, and Torture
Minor: Ableism