A review by juicelina
オンドアステップ On Doorstep by 총탁, Chongtak
3.0
The art for this was absolutely gorgeous. I loved the facial expressions so much. Just beautiful.
The story was cute, but I feel like the conflict could've been better. I think his reasoning for breaking in was stupid and also why was he able to break in so easily?? Like this is an ex cop who has past trauma of a break-in, wouldn't he have more security?? Like at least an alarm or something right? Idk. I think that could've been done better. They could've at least establish Jimmy as more of a thief/bad guy instead of just oh this guy stole a wallet and apparently he's really good at stealing.
Beyond all that though, the relationship was cute and I liked Reese and Jimmy a lot. Just wish the story was a lil better.
The story was cute, but I feel like the conflict could've been better. I think his reasoning for breaking in was stupid and also why was he able to break in so easily?? Like this is an ex cop who has past trauma of a break-in, wouldn't he have more security?? Like at least an alarm or something right? Idk. I think that could've been done better. They could've at least establish Jimmy as more of a thief/bad guy instead of just oh this guy stole a wallet and apparently he's really good at stealing.
Beyond all that though, the relationship was cute and I liked Reese and Jimmy a lot. Just wish the story was a lil better.