Was this book good? Not necessarily. Did I enjoy it a lot? Yes. It's very tropey. Very sapphic dark romance the little mermaid.
Things I loved:
Bisexual mermaid!
Stone butch lesbian princess!
Godpunk!
The narrative definitely has empathy and respect for sex workers.
Things I didn't like:
A lot of the prose.
The names were just kind of challenging for me. Typical of this sort of fantasy, but challenging.
Unquestioned authority of royalty.
Excessive mentions of and threats of sexual violence/rape to prove that the world is dark. This could have been used in tandem with other types of oppressive violence much more effectively than this book did.
Overall, would recommend if the description sounds good to you. It is what it says it's going to be, and I always appreciate that in a book.
Very useful writing advice. I felt like I was taking a class with a very good teacher who I didn't really like as a person. Would recommend if you're looking for frameworks for compelling storytelling, especially for feature films but also generally. Basically all of the advice in this book is applicable to novels, and a lot of it is also relevant to TV, short stories, plays, etc.
A very satisfying conclusion to the duology. I preferred book one as a story, but there was a lot to love here. I liked the multiple points of view, especially the one that starts vague and confusing and becomes clear as the book progresses. Spent the whole book rooting for the gays, of course. The plot just kind of felt like something I'd read before, maybe because it was a probably deliberate (and I think fairly effective) riff on the ending of Ender's Game, maybe because it just felt too paint-by-numbers. The characters were what breathed life into the unoriginal plot, and I loved what Martine did with them. I'm definitely excited to see what she writes next.
I'm glad I waited until the whole series was out to start this one because THAT ENDING!
I loved the worldbuilding and the characters. The multiple religions felt fleshed out and made sense for the setting, as did the conflict that sprang from those religions. I loved that there was no true villain and that both Serapio and Naranpa were simply following the path that had been set out for them and doing their best with it. I also loved that the cultures we encounter in the book had varying attitudes to gender and sexuality as well as other cultural differences. Fantasy is so often either based in a fully homophobic and misogynistic world or in a fully queernormative one, and this approach makes so much more sense.
I do wish that the supporting cast had been more fleshed out. Iktan is the only non-POV character who felt fully fleshed out. I think that was mostly down to length, though. This book could have been 100-200 pages longer, though that might have slowed it down too much. And I did like the group scenes we got a whole lot (the ones with Xiala's crew maybe being the weakest of the lot).
I was expecting Xiala to be my favorite character because she's the sort of character I normally love and cannot get enough of, but while I quite enjoyed her, Naranpa was far and away my favorite. I adored her and spent the entire book rooting for her -- not necessarily for the sun priests and co generally, but very much for Naranpa in particular. And they're both bi! Truly a win for us all.
Wonderful twinings of the author’s life and experiences with their knowledge of various sea creatures. It probably could have had more science, but I didn’t mind. I especially loved the essays that focused on queer community. The ones that focused on dating weren’t as successful for me personally.
Loved the characters and the story and the sheer quantity of historical details the author packed in. Always a fan of a queer historical story. It was just too short.