While I enjoyed hearing from Curtis's gay background from the rust belt, I found the actual writing to be too surface level and bland. I never felt like I got to the meat of the emotional level of the author and he never failed to remind us that he grew up Republican and I had to Google it to figure out that he's part of the Democratic party now instead of hearing it through the novel.
I had a hard time loving Sneha, she makes a lot of pointed and ignorant comments and actions as she grows and the first 30% of the book struggled to capture my attention. There's internalized racism, homophobia, and classism here that Sneha can only face when she herself is directly impacted. It's strange to watch these people of color fall into white relationships while continuously throwing jabs at each other about "becoming white". The two black characters, Tig and KJ, felt like vehicles to move plot and character development along rather than complex individuals.
I liked watching Sneha grow as individual, but there were too many points where the book didn't sit right with me, even if we're supposed to be watching her growth through her own ignorance and challenges
While I enjoyed the stylistic voice, I quickly got tired of the way imagery was repeated. The Rosemary subplot felt weird, as did the pictures of young girls, both of which were just dead-ended.
This was hard to get through because all the characters were so painfully unlikeable. They all think too highly of themselves, are immensely pretentious, and the voice for them drive me crazy. The actual writing style was the only thing that kept me reading.
While I thought Monique's character felt flat and not well fleshed out, once Evelyn started telling her story, I was hooked. I thought this was going to be a boring book about a straight white woman and some take on Henry the VII's story, but I'm glad I was wrong. I enjoyed having a character like Evelyn, who I could both dislike and enjoy at the same time.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book. Even if some of the themes felt ham fisted, I think people need that. I loved how consistently those themes played into our MC's decisions and that this book was a turnaround from the frenzied actions of the first book. Excited for the third book!