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Did not finish book. Stopped at 40%.
4.0
Did not finish book. Stopped at 17%.
Mallory, however, is wholly unlikeable — self-righteous, stubborn, and short-sighted.
There were multiple plot holes that I couldn’t get past, though I only read 17% of this book.
1. How on earth is dear old dad not paying child support/alimony???? Two of his three kids are still minors!!!!! Hello??? Is he dead???
2. Mallory’s lack of big-picture thinking about her job and the chess fellowship she was offered completely negated any and all believability of her having any actual skill at chess. You’re telling me she can strategize multiple hypothetical moves/outcomes in multiple turns ahead of time, but she can’t see that the year-long, SALARIED fellowship can not only lead to tournament wins with huge payouts, but also make her name and intelligence public, leading to more and better (and higher-paid) jobs in the future??? Come on. There’s literally no way that’s the same character.
Mallory was insufferable. I also didn’t like what seemed to me like the vilification of Easton, who honestly rocked. Mallory’s mom is in a terrible situation — as a woman with a chronic condition/physical disability, I so get it — but something about her absence (physical and emotional) didn’t sit right with me at all.
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
However, this book was rushed. The second half had me breathless, because everything happened and resolved the way dominoes fall - faster and faster. I would’ve preferred if Armstrong had taken her time with the end. It would’ve been delicious, if drawn-out rather than crammed together. Still, Edmund was adorable and August had grown immensely from book one. I don’t know how I feel about Rosalind — I might have to think on it and return to this review when I form an opinion.
Graphic: Confinement and Murder
Moderate: Death, Sexual content, Vomit, Medical content, Kidnapping, Grief, and Pregnancy
Minor: Infidelity, Toxic relationship, Violence, Death of parent, and Gaslighting
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
My favorite things:
1. Deaf representation!
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A few things kept this from a higher score for me:
1. I wanted Chloe to be more verbally expressive to Warren about the nice things she thought about him. Not at his level (but SWOON!), but I felt like Warren deserved a little more verbal affection.
2. Chloe didn’t pick up on one of the things Warren said soon after moving in and repeated later in a more romantic context:
3. Whyyyyyy were we never shown Rachel’s visit to the apartment and evaluation of Chloe’s circumstances???? What a missed opportunity for some higher-stakes tension!
4. It was pretty insta-lovey, which on one hand makes sense (Chloe and Warren share v similar pasts in addition to their present similar situations), but on the other was a bit concerning, given both their traumas. Their repeated statements of wanting “forever” when they’ve known each other five months at most worried me.
5. Warren does a bit of a 180, personality-wise. The book is in first-person POV (Chloe’s POV), so it’s understandable that she might not have picked up on Warren’s more concealed positive attributes, but Chloe doesn’t comment on either her surprise or reflection with her new understandings of who Warren is. This and my second list point made Chloe seem entirely unobservant, which was frustrating.
TL;DR — Fast-paced and mildly steamy, but also heartwarming. I loved the recurrent themes of healing and forgiveness, as well as opening up to and being vulnerable with loved ones for deeper bonds.
Graphic: Alcoholism, Sexual content, and Abandonment
Moderate: Addiction, Drug abuse, Drug use, Panic attacks/disorders, Vomit, Medical content, and Alcohol
Minor: Death of parent and Pregnancy
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.5
Graphic: Grief, Death of parent, and Abandonment
Moderate: Death, Sexual content, and Alcohol
Did not finish book. Stopped at 35%.
That's the trouble, actually. It's fine. I could only read this before bed, because it kept putting me to sleep. That is, in a small way, also a compliment - Allende's prose, its rhythm, is soothing. But the book is also boring boring boring.
I've been trying to read more diverse books. Even so, Allende in general has been on my TBR, as a renowned female South American author. However, leaving the country where the book is set unnamed was frustrating to me. I've learned since abandoning this book that it's set in Chile, but as I read it, the vagueness of the location irked me. I want to know more about other places. Leaving Violeta's setting unspecified was counterproductive to that - it just wasn't a choice I liked or appreciated. I'm quite aware that that's a personal problem, and that Allende's choice was purposeful and valid, but I don't have to like it.
The amount of people in the reviews who were at all surprised as to Camilo's identity is baffling to me. It's so blatantly obvious to me that he's her grandson, or at the very least a grandson-like person in her life. Y'all need to work on reading comprehension.
Violeta seems, to me, aimless - an odd sensation, given it's the story of a woman's life that spanned throughout tumultuous times. But even 35% through the book, Violeta has only been "involved" with contemporary world events tangentially, if at all.
Also, the older Violeta telling the story has a little personality, but her younger self has very little. Honestly, the side characters were all more interesting than she was, from Torito and the Rivases to her aunts and Miss Taylor.
So, ultimately, I didn't care, don't care, can't care. I'll be donating or selling this book.
Graphic: Chronic illness, Death, Suicide, Death of parent, and Pandemic/Epidemic
Moderate: Child abuse, Gun violence, Miscarriage, Rape, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Terminal illness, Violence, Medical content, Abortion, Pregnancy, and Sexual harassment
Minor: Ableism, Confinement, Sexual content, Xenophobia, Grief, Murder, Alcohol, Colonisation, and War
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
4.5
Other favorite features:
- Forgiveness after deep hurt 🥰
- Mysteries with twists that truly kept me guessing
- Supernatural phenomena
- Inclusion of folklore
- Positive LGBT+ representation
- Second-chance romance
Graphic: Child death, Death, Terminal illness, Violence, Forced institutionalization, Blood, Medical content, Grief, Murder, Gaslighting, Abandonment, and Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Cancer, Mental illness, Sexual content, Death of parent, Pregnancy, and Alcohol
Minor: Transphobia
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.0
Graphic: Child abuse, Child death, Death, Gun violence, Sexual violence, Violence, Medical content, Death of parent, Murder, Toxic friendship, Alcohol, and Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Alcoholism, Sexual content, Toxic relationship, Blood, Grief, Stalking, Gaslighting, Classism, and Pandemic/Epidemic
Minor: Racism
Did not finish book. Stopped at 41%.