Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.0
Not as good as the first book but still enjoyed it. Sometimes.
It started off very good but then got slow when the only thing that happened was walking, walking, and more walking with Thomas going over the same thoughts. A few things happened during those walks that were very interesting, but it wasn't enough to keep me from being bored. And then when he was reunited with his friends is when the story started to kick back up and continued going steady.
I like the added worldbuilding that happened in the book, even though most of the information we learned about the world was most likely lies or half-truths so WICKED could get the right reactions for their tests.
Glad I'm finally done and can now move on to Death Cure and finishing this series! Idk if I'm gonna watch the Scorched Trial movie like I did for the first book/movie. I might read Death Cure first and then watch the last two movies; I've heard that the two are very different from the books and don't want to confuse book canon & movie canon.
Overall, a decent second book that manages to add to the series.
This story would've been so much better if either Stephanie or Carina didn't exist. If Stephanie didn't exist, the story could've revolved around Branson's friends banding together to help bring him out of his workaholic shell while helping him deal with Carina. If Carina didn't exist, it could've been the sweet secret romance the story tried to be, hiding Stephanie from his dad to protect her. Or, not have Stephanie instantly fall in love with him and have their feelings grow as she and his friends band together to help Bran deal with Carina.
Also Ellie, Stephanie's daughter, might as well not exist with how non-important she was to the story. Stephanie spends more time thinking about Branson then about her own sick daughter. Ellie has a disease that kill her (from what I understand) if Stephanie is unable to buy the expensive medicine she needs (and even with the medicine she'll still die, just when she's way older), but Stephanie spends the entire story constantly deciding that she needs to quit her very well-paying job because she couldn't handle seeing her not-single boss with his fiancée. Stephanie has only been working for Branson for 2 years, and he's been dating Carina for 1 year. You'd think she'll be able to work her feelings out during that year, especially since her job is very important to her daughter's survival, but nope. She spent that year diving into her feelings, hoping that Branson will leave Carina and look her way. And when he abruptly announces his engagement to Carina, she immediately thinks about quitting. Fuck her sick daughter, mama can't continue buying her medicine because she can't stand to see her non-single boss get married.
And god their first meeting (which was her being interviewed by him) was terrible, and it made me despise Stephanie's character. Who demands a blind person to prove they're blind?? Was that scene was supposed to be a quirky and cute first meeting??
And then we get the Vegas trip being mentioned. Now I'll admit, I'm a dumbass. My brain didn't connect the title to the story until the Vegas trip was mentioned (lol). During the entire trip Stephanie only thought about Ellie one or two times. Once when wanting to bring her to see some cool fountain show, and a second time when she once again is determined to quit and hopes that she'll find another way to pay for Ellie's life saving medicine.
Mother of the fucking year. Why have a daughter character when her own mother doesn't even care about her? BRANSON thought more about Ellie than Stephanie did, marrying Carina so he can get her family's business's new, more expensive medicine Ellie needs so that he can lower the price for them (and of course for other kids, cause that's his passion project business but Ellie was his main thought behind the decision) (and also likely one of his bffs, who has the same disease, but he only says Ellie was the main force behind his choice). And he hasn't even MET the kid. (also later on in the story Stephanie has Laurie deal with Ellie's nightly breathing treatment, so she can sneak off to Branson's room cause secret marriage. I'm just going to assume Ellie wasn't the type of kid who'd want her mom there during treatments, cause wow.)
Back to Carina. I was hoping for someone who was more than a high school bully type. Her first conversation with Stephanie tried too hard to make her into a character you're supposed to hate. I didn't start hating Carina until she started saying ableist stuff about and to Branson. The reason why I didn't hate her at first was because everyone around Branson knew he was in love with Stephanie, so obviously his girlfriend would've noticed too, so of course she was mean to Stephanie since she assumed the two were sleeping together, and her and Branson were dating openly so Stephanie as his personal assistant did know about her. Can't blame her for hating Stephanie.
Every single conflict was quickly and easily resolved, to the point where I wondered if they were even important to begin with.
Oh yeah, and Stephanie officially marries Branson without even making sure her daughter got to know him. Granted, he sprung the surprise proposal/marriage on her in a board meeting room after a showdown with his dad, but still! The first time Ellie even met Branson was when she got lost in his mansion, days/week after she and Stephanie had moved in. Or maybe her first time meeting Branson was when she found him sleeping in Stephanie's bed without a shirt on. Either way, **slow claps** mother of the year right here!
Stephanie is a terrible mother, putting herself over the survival of her child. Branson is a good character when he's not obsessing over Stephanie. His best friends, I love them. Carina sucks and doesn't deserve any forgiveness (and Stephanie is a big hearted idiot who forgives the woman who drugged the person she loves (Branson). pure heart slop). The other characters were okay.
Overall, the writing was easy to read, and I really liked Branson and his friends when they weren't fussing over Stephanie. I loved how close they were and that all four are disabled characters (also they love Star Wars, eee!). I wish the story had focused more on that and gradually tied the romance in. I'm not even going to bother with the sequel. From what I've seen during Finn's and Laura's first meeting, it's not going to be worth it. (Laura is Stephanie's best friend and Ellie's nanny who's only personality is being an overprotective friend).
oh yeah, and Stephanie says "jiminy cricket" when awed/excited. yeah. quirky. only says it two times, but that was two times too many. just a little pet peeve.
god I got heated again writing this lmao
But hey! At least Branson didn't constantly use some dumb nickname for Stephanie. The only nickname he calls her is Steph, which is what she calls herself. *chefs kiss* first romance story I've read where a dumb nickname wasn't used.
Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
5.0
OLD Review: I really enjoyed the book! I'm still reading through the second one, and it's not as enjoyable as the first one, but this first book really made me enjoy the concept of Maze Runner.
New Review 10/3/2024: Years later and I'm still in love with this book! I love the writing and all of the characters in it! It's been great to see side characters I've forgotten about and love them all over again. It's been so long since I've read this that I was wonderfully surprised at a lot of moments that happened.
I vaguely remember the movie and I'm sorta happy that it's changed some stuff from the book? I'm going to see the movie again today to make sure I feel this way. As of right now, I like that there's changes because it fits the feel of the movie while keeping the charm of this book.
I'm so glad I picked this series back up again. I laughed a little at seeing my old review because I never finished the Scorched Trials and now I'm about to see if I get those same feelings.
I've never seen the Scorched Trials movie and I'm wondering if watching that will help me or not. I think if the changes continued in the second movie then I should just stick with the book first.
Overall, amazing book! One of the few that has a special place in my heart ❤️
It's an okayish YA steam punk retelling of Peter Pan.
I wish the characters were more fleshed out, and that there was more to the ending but I'm so glad to be done with this book. I dropped it earlier this year but picked it back up.
Hook's chapters were a chore to get through. It felt like the author didn't know what to do with his character, and his POV felt so cartoonishily villainous. The part where he suddenly became attracted to one of his female prisoners and told her she'll be by his side as they rule together, after everything he's done to her and how she's waaaaaay older than him and never showed any interest! It was disturbing and I completely checked out of the story at that point.
I was looking forward to Tiger Lily's version in this book and was disappointed that her race was changed from Native American to Indian. I know that the way the Native Americans were portrayed in the movie is controversial but the amazing thing about a retelling is fixing the problem not erasing her race all together. And it sucked that she didn't have any bigger moments.
And I can't believe what Gwen did in that ending and how her feelings for Hook completely switched! <spoilers>After everything he did, her angers turn sympathic?? She wants to SAVE him??</spoilers>
So glad to be done with the story. I'm not going to bother with the prequel or the other retellings in this series. These books are written for a younger demographic and I simply know I won't like the rest.
I'm not even going to read the second book. It's from Finn's POV and I don't want to sit through that bullshit.
This story started off okayish. I wasn't having fun but it wasn't a pain to continue reading. I started loving the story when Autumn and her friends started to feel like actual characters. I believe this was around the time the writing stopped being so vague about their time together and got detailed with the scenes.
This book had a perfect coming-of-age story and I was going to mark this as a perfect 4-star (due to the beginning being meh) but then...
I started to not like this story after Jamie broke up with Autumn. Him cheating on her with Sasha wasn't surprising, I figured something was up the moment he said "Me too." in one scene after Autumn told him she loved him. He always replied with a "I love you, too." so that change was a huge tip off.
And I didn't mind that Finn and Autumn started hanging out together again. I thought that moment was sweet, that they were finally rekindling their friendship.
And then things started getting weird. They were doing romantic things together while he was still dating Sylvie, who was overseas on vacation. They fell asleep in Finn's bed together, they hung out really late at night, they did that stupid romance trope during a horror movie where the girl cowers into the guy and the guy puts his arm around her shoulders.
I didn't think it would get worse than that but of course it did.
They had sex. Finn cheated on Sylvie and Autumn was a part of that betrayal the same way Sasha and Jamie did to her.
That scene killed their characters for me. I didn't care that Finn was planning on breaking up with Sylvie once she returned. He still cheated on her and I hate this story for doing that. I didn't even care that he died. I pushed through the rest of the chapters after that horror movie scene and stopped caring all together when they had sex.
The only reason this story isn't a 1-star is because of those moments before the breakup with Jamie happened. I was having fun with the book and because of that this story is a 2-stars for me.
I'm not going to bother reading the Finn POV book. Right now, I feel nothing for Finn and I just know I'll just hate his pining for Autumn knowing what he'll do to Sylvie in the end.
Overall, a story that had great potential if it didn't enjoy cheating tropes.
Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
5.0
Amazing horror book!!
It had everything I was craving. Small town, cornfields, and killings. Heavy on the small town and cornfields! Clowns are an unexpected bonus and now I want more clown horror haha
I loved the characters and everything that happened in the book! I bought this in 2020 and hate that I kept putting it off for so long. This book has everything I love in classic slasher films.
I cannot wait to read the other two books, I'll definitely be using my money to buy signed copies ❤️
I heard a movie adaptation was being made and I'm so excited!! I can't wait until it releases, I hope it releases in an October, it'll be perfect horror vibes.
The first chapter almost made me drop the book, and I'm so glad I didn't. If you like Fiona from Shameless then you'll like Quinn in this book.
She rushes into relationships to deal with the guilt surrounding her best friend's death, and that's what happens in the first couple of chapters. I didn't like how quickly she revealed parts of her trauma to Malcolm, her love interest, when before it'll say she's trying to hide from her past.
This story was surprisingly good and addicting. The writing is simple and easy to read, which helps me get lost into the story ❤️ I couldn't put it down, plus my Libby hold was about to expire in 2 days so I refused to not finish this book in time and I'm so glad I did!
I love all of the characters and their relationships with each other. There are actually female friendships for Quinn, and ones that felt genuine! So rare in the other romance books I've read!
I don't know what genre this book falls under but I love it a lot. A girl finding herself and healing from her traumatic past, and finding new support systems while re-bridging old ones. It's so cozy and feel-good.
The sex scene also helps me realize that I love vague sex scenes where every movement isn't given details. It was two paragraphs long with the only thing being described was Quinn's feelings, which was great!
And oh god, the nicknames. What is it with romance books and their need to give nicknames longer than the woman's name. Her name is Quinn and the nickname Malcolm gives her is Cat's Eye. WHAT, COME ON lmaoo It's so dumb.
Overall, this story is wonderful and I love it a lot! Will definitely be buying it to have a physical copy once I get a job haha ❤️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I had a lot of fun with this book! I didn't like most of the lusting scenes, I got tired of reading "my core throbbed" in almost every chapter and wished some of those scenes had been replaced with ones that focused on the culture and gods. Very disappointed they left the mountains so quickly.
I guessed the ending during the mountain scene and I am happy that I guessed correctly!
Before I started reading this book, I somehow thought that the story would be about Frigga and that she was given a variant spelling of her name and the story would be about her life before marrying Odin BUT turns out I got the gods names wrong haha
While I did enjoy this book there were moments where I wished for more. I wished Freya and Bodil spent more time together, because it would've made her blind rage moment more impactful. I also wish that the female characters around her were built up more. We mainly got one dimensional female antagonist or distant acquaintances. For the latter, when they died, because we didn't get much scenes with them it felt less impactful. Like missed opportunities for Freya to bond with them and for them to become friends. Maybe that was the author's intent. I hope in the next story we get female friendships; I'm noticing in the romance books I've read that female friendships aren't a thing and it sucks. I felt so much happiness for Freya when she joined Bodil and her maidens at the campfire. Freya absolutely needs female friends!
Very interested to read the sequel. Overall, a good story!
The rape scene was worse than I thought it would be. I've legit seen people defend Daphne in the book making it seem like Simon was the one who initiated the sex, so I thought Simon would be drunk and awake but NO he was asleep with morning wood. It's literally written that she felt a rush of power in the situation, of how happy she was to be in control, and how she felt nothing but pleasure when he tried to get her off of him the moment he realized she was forcing him to cum inside her.
I waited for this book on Libby for a month, probably longer, and told myself to finish the book for that reason but one chapter after the rape scene I realized that finishing the book means I'll have to read Daphne get her happily ever after and that Simon would have to push aside his feelings in order to make HER happy. That is beyond fucked up.
And it wasn't just the rape scene that made me give this book a 1 star.
It's bland and boring. With a fake dating trope, it NEEDS drama. It needs more than just one scene where one becomes jealous at the romantic attention the other is getting, and that scene in Daphne's calling room was not it due to how soon into the fake dating it happened.
Daphne tells Simon that the fake dating wouldn't work on the Mamas as they'll continue pushing their single daughters at him but we don't get a scene like that! Even if it was just Daphne's self consciousness letting her say that, we still don't get to experience Daphne getting jealous of the attention he's getting.
They fall in love too quickly, which goes against the fake dating trope. They're supposed to have that realization that makes them go into denial over their feelings, only to realize that they can't escape how they feel, and then there's supposed to be a moment where they wonder how on earth are they going to turn this from fake dating into real dating, wondering if the other person even feels the same way about them.
The fake dating trope is supposed to come with drama and angst, but everything goes perfectly without any bumps in the road. I wouldn't even call the duel a bump because it was so dumb.
I knew she was going to rape him before I started reading but I liked her siblings and Lady Whistledown from the show a lot, so I read it for them and figured I'll push past this book to get to the other ones. Wasn't worth it, plus I've since learned that her brothers are trash to women.
My curiosity to see how bad the men in these books are makes me want to try reading the other books. I don't see myself finishing them either.
Overall, Daphne is a POS. I hate this book. And to the defenders who say "this is what happened in the 1800s.", this book wasn't written in the 1800s, and y'all aren't reading it in the 1800s. I would not be surprised if fans of these book also love Haunting Adeline. I am legit mad that the book fans talked about this dark romance series as if everything was sweet and wholesome, y'all really have people thinking these books are normal romances.
There's a youtuber who has played some Nancy Drew games that I've been meaning to watch and she got me interested in the whole Nancy Drew series. I saw these books at a Dollar Tree and thought it'll be fun to read them. Glad I got them!