chopprjock's review
2.0
Decent premise, marred by the author’s lack of craft
A good story and a well conceived plot. But the author could have used a few more revisions and/or edits to clean up the stilted dialogue and jerky scenes.
A good story and a well conceived plot. But the author could have used a few more revisions and/or edits to clean up the stilted dialogue and jerky scenes.
capellan's review
1.0
I would have liked to enjoy this military-themed SF adventure, but I didn't. The structure is awkward, the writing stilted, and the characters thin, with a noticeable tendency to just shout exposition at each other rather than actually act like real people. If there was some particularly interesting idea here it might be salvageable, but it's bog-standard "the robots have rebelled" stuff.
jamiebooksandladders's review
4.0
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Actual Rating: 3.5*
I enjoyed a lot of this and the ending was so intense! I can't wait to see where it goes from here.
Actual Rating: 3.5*
I enjoyed a lot of this and the ending was so intense! I can't wait to see where it goes from here.
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