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chelle_la_belle's review against another edition
1.0
Description:
Sabrina Tyler is head over heels in love with her boss and best friend, Dante Hart. She thinks that Dante has no romantic interest in her but she's wrong.
Dante doesn't believe in love or commitment or any kind. Sabrina has gotten under his skin, but Dante has no intention of acting on it.
One wild night changes their relationship forever, but Dante lacks faith in love and doesn't believe in Happily Ever Afters.
My Thoughts:
Warning this review is going to be a rant review
First thing first, this book has a ton of sex scenes! Like holy s**t. I've never read so many sex scenes in a book. I'm talking two or more per chapter and the chapters are really short! Every Time i was like
In the end the sex scenes really took away from the story and character development. ALSO if you are going to publish your book whether it be self published or professionally published
CHECK FOR SPELLING AND GRAMMAR MISTAKES! I saw at least two or three...For example in Page 5 when Sabrina describes getting the job with Dante Ella writes "I was thrilled when i was got the job". Then she goes on to page 12 and writes " They doesn't do it in-front of me and the girls" and continues on to page 13 with " I blow my hair dry".
One last thing to mention...our two main characters. Sabrina how oblivious do you have to be to see if someone likes or loves you...like i get not picking it up right away but damn!
Anyway that's it for this review. I will not be picking up anything else by this author. Let me know if you've read this book and what you thought about it. :)
My Blog:http://witchybooks.tumblr.com/
Sabrina Tyler is head over heels in love with her boss and best friend, Dante Hart. She thinks that Dante has no romantic interest in her but she's wrong.
Dante doesn't believe in love or commitment or any kind. Sabrina has gotten under his skin, but Dante has no intention of acting on it.
One wild night changes their relationship forever, but Dante lacks faith in love and doesn't believe in Happily Ever Afters.
My Thoughts:
Warning this review is going to be a rant review
First thing first, this book has a ton of sex scenes! Like holy s**t. I've never read so many sex scenes in a book. I'm talking two or more per chapter and the chapters are really short! Every Time i was like
In the end the sex scenes really took away from the story and character development. ALSO if you are going to publish your book whether it be self published or professionally published
CHECK FOR SPELLING AND GRAMMAR MISTAKES! I saw at least two or three...For example in Page 5 when Sabrina describes getting the job with Dante Ella writes "I was thrilled when i was got the job". Then she goes on to page 12 and writes " They doesn't do it in-front of me and the girls" and continues on to page 13 with " I blow my hair dry".
One last thing to mention...our two main characters. Sabrina how oblivious do you have to be to see if someone likes or loves you...like i get not picking it up right away but damn!
Anyway that's it for this review. I will not be picking up anything else by this author. Let me know if you've read this book and what you thought about it. :)
My Blog:http://witchybooks.tumblr.com/
carrieroe's review against another edition
2.0
I will say one thing about this book, it is filled with really hot sex scenes, but that's all it's worth. Seriously, I didn't enjoy this book in the least. The writing was very dragging, I found myself just skipping to the conversations and even those weren't that interesting. I seriously disappointed with this one since it's got a pretty good rating on goodreads. Oh well, it just wasn't my cup of tea. I mean, hello, a good sex scene is pretty well off in a book, but seriously?! it was like every other page the characters were just going at it like crazy animals! ugh!
In this book we are introduced the Hart family consisting of Dante, the eldest and father-like figure of the bunch, Damien who is the easy going one and Spencer Cross, their brother from a another mother and the twins Delilah and Dominique. They all grew up with terrrible parents who were sex and drug addicts who never really gave a crap about their children. Dante was forced to put up with the beating and stand in as father figure to them all. But one they he does have in common with his brothers are that they are all against commitment. That is until he meets Sabrina Tyler. She enters his life as an intern in to Hart International (Hart family's company) and from there on their spark is instant. One night after Sabrina's dance competition she and Dante decided to take their relationship to a whole new level. From then on it's ups and downs with Sabrina trying to put up with Dante's commitment issues. It's a ride for the senses filled with hot steamy sex, all out drama, and a lot of dirty talkin'
In this book we are introduced the Hart family consisting of Dante, the eldest and father-like figure of the bunch, Damien who is the easy going one and Spencer Cross, their brother from a another mother and the twins Delilah and Dominique. They all grew up with terrrible parents who were sex and drug addicts who never really gave a crap about their children. Dante was forced to put up with the beating and stand in as father figure to them all. But one they he does have in common with his brothers are that they are all against commitment. That is until he meets Sabrina Tyler. She enters his life as an intern in to Hart International (Hart family's company) and from there on their spark is instant. One night after Sabrina's dance competition she and Dante decided to take their relationship to a whole new level. From then on it's ups and downs with Sabrina trying to put up with Dante's commitment issues. It's a ride for the senses filled with hot steamy sex, all out drama, and a lot of dirty talkin'
kianatracyy's review against another edition
3.0
i read this book almost 4-6 years ago and decided to re-read it because i remember it being pretty good. i was shocked at how this book was almost complete smut LOLLLL (dare i say too much spice
lilnoosh's review against another edition
medium-paced
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
1.0
Poorly written with stiff, unnatural, and generalized dialogue. The concepts are very elementary and needed to be fleshed out. The writing style read more like a day to day diary than a story.
One star for the steamy sex scenes because that’s all I was reading for anyway.
One star for the steamy sex scenes because that’s all I was reading for anyway.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Sexual content
Moderate: Misogyny
Minor: Addiction, Alcoholism, Drug abuse, Emotional abuse, Grief, Car accident, Death of parent, Abandonment, and Alcohol
hippiedaizy's review against another edition
2.0
Ummm...what did I just read? I thought Dante was a womanizer? He was a freaking emotional wreck. Talking too damn much. It was like a freaking Hallmark movie except a rated X version. It was too cheesy.
Sure they had hot sex like 70% of this book, but I couldn't get over how "intense" everything was. Made me sick. I found myself cringing a lot at their words to each other.
Sorry, that's kind of harsh, but that's just how I feel. I got it for free on Amazon, so I can't complain that much.
Unfortunately, this didn't work for me, but I will still read the 2nd book since I got it for free as well.
Sure they had hot sex like 70% of this book, but I couldn't get over how "intense" everything was. Made me sick. I found myself cringing a lot at their words to each other.
Sorry, that's kind of harsh, but that's just how I feel. I got it for free on Amazon, so I can't complain that much.
Unfortunately, this didn't work for me, but I will still read the 2nd book since I got it for free as well.
sleighbelle's review against another edition
3.0
I teetered between three and four stars, however, as much as I loved the sex scenes (80% of the book), I felt the story line wasn't as developed as much as I felt it had the potential to. I thought this was an easy read, but the author could have developed the characters so much more. There are secrets to why Dante behaved the way he did, but how could Sabrina be sooooooo oblivious to his feelings for her. My emotions were a mixed bag of love and hate by the end of this book.
sheena1031's review against another edition
3.0
This was a cute, if not quite original, story. But it was a fun read. My two biggest complaints were 1.) She over explained things to death. Less is more, and makes it more realistic, and 2.) The dialogue was not realistic. People don’t really talk to each other like that. This one ties in strongly with the over explaining thing.
But overall, it wasn’t too terribly bad, and I’m interested in finding out what happens in the next book regardless.
But overall, it wasn’t too terribly bad, and I’m interested in finding out what happens in the next book regardless.