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The King Must Die by Mary Renault

berenikeasteria's review against another edition

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5.0

Perhaps my most major criticism of the entire book is that it does get off to a bit of a slow start. Renault's attention to details and wonderfully sophisticated use of language are usually a big treat, but we are thrown right into the thick of it straight from the off and what's going on is left to the reader to figure out. As a result some readers may feel for the first couple of chapters that the conjunction of confusing situation, complex language and lack of initial events or action renders the beginning of this book somewhat plodding. However, once you get past that initial stumbling block, you won't be able to put this book down until the end. The plot basically follows the Theseus legend, but Renault is not afraid to take detours and make alterations in order to make the story more historical than mythological and for the sake of plausibility and believability. Obviously this walks a fine line between improving on and butchering the legend, but Renault judges that line to perfection. She even explains why she deviates from the conventional idea of Theseus as a huge, muscled man after the model of Herakles; namely because a youth chosen for bull-leaping in Krete would have had to have been slight, quick and agile rather than big and hulking, and because Theseus is often shown in close hand-to-hand combat with brutish monsters and it seems unlikely that he could have overcome them by sheer strength alone, more likely that he was a slighter build and relied on clever wrestling tricks of the trade rather than pushing power.

The plot follows a good arc, though perhaps since it is strongly based on the legend we cannot attribute that pleasing character growth and story arc to Renault alone. One of the arcs is in the way that the setting becomes ever more metropolitan; we begin in Theseus' homeland, a bit of a provincial backwater of a kingdom to be honest, moving on to the city of Athens which is a glittering jewel of the Peloponnese as portrayed by Renault at this period, and finally Theseus ends up on the highly developed island of Krete. More than anything else though, the arc of the story is Theseus' coming of age. From a boy struggling to understand his place in the world in Troizen and believing that he is the son of Poseidon, to the frustrated year-king of Eleusis where he learns to use his wits to earn his powers and effect change, to the heir of Aigeus in Athens where he must learn the responsibilities that come with his position, and to the palace at Knossos where Theseus becomes true leader of his own little microcosm of society. The developments in the plot seem natural and unforced, nothing leaps completely out of the implausible blue, but that's not to say that the story is in any way predictable - unless you've read the legend of Theseus before of course, but even then don't expect anything!

The quality of the writing is very high, but yet I found it fairly accessible as well, albeit the potential to come across as slightly plodding and slow in the first few chapters. In terms of historical setting, Mary Renault's novel is completely groundbreaking. The legend of Theseus is a well known story in Greek myth, the most famous episode in his tale being his confrontation with the fantastical half-man half-bull creature known as the Minotaur in the bowels of a twisted maze called the Labyrinth and aided by a ball of twine given to him by Princess Ariadne. There have been many retellings of the legend, but Mary Renault's is the first attempt to find the history behind the myth. Given this, this might be a good point to also discuss historical accuracy. Keeping in mind that this was published in 1958 and our knowledge about this period of history has since moved on by over half a century, it's clear that Renault has put significant effort into the historical accuracy of the piece, and even some of the scenarios which we now know to be incorrect were the accepted interpretation by the academic community based on the knowledge of 1958. There's no magic involved, only plausible human stories. Great stuff, highly recommended.

annainghram's review against another edition

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adventurous medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.0

emfiander's review against another edition

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adventurous challenging dark reflective medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

4.25

This book is a testament to the fact that I will love any narrative device, so long as it’s well-written. 
 
It’s a really fun, very classic adventure hero story. It gets off to a bit of a slow start, but once I hit the Eleusis chapters, I couldn’t put it down. It’s definitely a nostalgic kind of story, which has a lot to do with Theseus as the main character. Modern audiences are attuned to wanting a protagonist with an arc that involves internal stakes as well as the external, and that’s not really Theseus. He’s a winner who stays winning. And yet I found his story incredibly compelling to read. 
 
Theseus is a born and bred leader, and the way he moves through the world reflects his understanding of what that means. He is not a common man, and he holds himself to incredibly high standards in regards to duty, honor, and legacy. His sense of honor especially is what defines him as a character—he is constantly considering his responsibility to his people, what it means to do right by the gods, and how a leader should behave. His flaws are not at the forefront of his journey, but he does have them: he’s rash and hot-headed, and his confidence borders on arrogance. However, he’s always quick to point out his mistakes in the narrative (easy to do through the framework of an older man telling the stories of his youth), and his flaws never seem to derail things or hold him back for more than a few paragraphs. This is something I have found incredibly grating in other, poorer works, but the storycraft here is so strong that it actually ends up working incredibly well. 
 
This book isn’t fantasy, it’s historical fiction, but it’s depicting a world that feels so wholly foreign from our own that it may as well be. While I think many fantasy authors understandably choose to create characters that feel relatable in some way, to give their audience a foothold of normalcy in their otherwise unrecognizable world, Theseus does not feel like a real person, like someone you might meet in your own life. He is a mythic figure, a hero for the ages, and if your name is going to live on throughout time, then you probably aren’t very relatable—heroes, as it turns out, are not just like us, at least according to Mary Renault. 
 
I did think the ending to the Crete section was a little anticlimactic and underwhelming. I really enjoyed all the Crete stuff as we learned more about life in the Bull Court, but frankly, I would have liked to see a whole lot more detail there. There was a lot of really rich setup in both the politics and the bull fighting, but a lot of it got glossed over as events started to unfold, and the way that whole storyline concluded felt a little rushed and almost kind of random. 
 
That said, the ultimate ending, in the Naxos section, was really well done and I thought tied up the Ariadne stuff in an interesting, satisfying way. Anyone who knows the myth of Theseus is familiar with what happens with Theseus and Ariadne following Crete, and though I always had a soft spot for Theseus above any of the other Greek heroes, his treatment of Ariadne post Crete was always a difficult thing to reconcile. In this version, I felt like the foreshadowing was woven into their relationship quite naturally, and the way it all plays out makes total sense with his character and the themes of the book. 

rogerd's review against another edition

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It didn't work for me

steelfern's review against another edition

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adventurous slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.0

perhaps just not the read for me in this moment- can't tell if the audiobook helped or harmed.

lenny9987's review against another edition

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adventurous dark medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

3.75

andromaches's review against another edition

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3.0

Um dos maiores problema desse livro é ele ser em primeira pessoa, e ficar páginas na cabeça do Teseu é de enlouquecer qualquer um. E pior ainda, de um Teseu sem personalidade. Nesse livro ele é mais um peão dos deuses, ele faz o que mandam ele fazer e pensa o que eles querem que ele pense, justiça poética? Talvez, mas não é muito interessante de ler. Vou confessar que vou precisar revisitar esse livro futuramente porque eu pulei as partes das aventuras de Teseu e fui logo pra quando ele foi pra Creta, só assim pra eu ler esse livro tão rápido.

E a parte de Creta é bem escrita, as descrições da sociedade foram as minhas favoritas, e como a autora realmente incorporou todos os elementos de touro que foram encontradas nos sites de Creta. A Corte do Touro, os bull-dancers, muito interessante. Mas nesse livro Asterius e o Minotauro são pessoas diferentes, não entendi direito o motivo dessa decisão, mas como a autora tentou fazer um livro que seja mais realista do que mitologia, eu vou ter que entrar nessa onda também nessa review.

Como minha conta é privada eu nem preciso dizer que eu não sou historiadora nem nada do tipo né, eu só leio muito e falo muito.

Quando se trata de mitos gregos, é impossível encontrar aquela que pode ser considerada a "versão original", pois algumas foram perdidas com o tempo junto com civilizações que hoje sabemos muito pouco, algumas nós só sabemos que existiram porque foram encontradas suas cerâmicas, porém pouco ou nenhum registro que hoje conseguimos traduzir. Essa foi uma realidade que eu me deparei quando eu conheci a história de Ariadne, principalmente quando resolvi pesquisar sobre Creta, mais especificamente sobre Civilização Minoica (nome que veio do próprio rei Minos).

Sabemos que: Touros eram muito prevalentes e que aquela poderia ter sido uma sociedade matriarcal. E, é claro, o mito de Teseu e o Minotauro.

Se tirarmos toda questão do homem touro e maldição dos deuses fica a história da invasão de uma civilização, e sua queda. Com a morte do Minotauro, o símbolo do labirinto e a perda de sua princesa, sobra a história de como os micênicos invadiram os minoicos. É tudo um grande telefone sem fio mitológico.

E onde Ariadne entra nisso tudo? A possível existência de Ariadne é antiga, ela é deusa muito antes de Dionísio lhe dar esse status, e ela pode ter existido sem um consorte. É o mesmo caso de Persephone, há registros de ela ter existido muito antes de Hades e, também, sem consorte. Alguns teorizam que ela (Ariadne) é a Deusa das Serpentes, que são várias estatuetas encontradas em Cnossos que representam uma suposta deusa da Civilização Minoica, e ela faz parte de muitas das obras encontradas onde mulheres estão no centro das cenas, porém não se sabe se era algo apenas religioso ou também politico.

Então veio a ascensão do patriarcado, e muitas deusas sofreram alterações. Agora Ariadne não era uma deusa, mas uma princesa que abandonou seu povo pelo ateniense Teseu, e essa história é uma das que tem mais versões diversas, e muitas não funcionam entre si, e esse foi um dos meus problemas com o livro Ariadne.

E Ariadne, meu Deus como eu amei algumas partes essa Ariadne

"Who is that girl?" I asked, and pointed, to be clear, because of the noise.
He looked shocked past speech. Then he hissed in my ear, "Be quiet. That is Ariadne the Holy One, the Goddess-on-Earth."
I looked. She had seen me pointing, and her back was stiff. I saw she was not one to be lightly affronted. I touched my brow and was silent.

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While she spoke Cretan she had been all goddess; but on the Greek she stumbled once, and I heard a human voice. The priestesses had turned to look, as if the ritual were broken. [...] "She is Ariadne the Most Holy, the Mistress of the Labyrinth. You'll only see her in her shrine. Otherwise no one sees her, any more than they do the King."



Mas infelizmente o resto, principalmente por ser o ponto de vista do Teseu, é bem misógino. Também a autora também tirou qualquer participação dela no mito... Ela não ajudou Teseu no labirinto e também tem um posição passiva depois que ela se apaixona por Teseu. Eu perdoo mais esse livro porque ele foi escrito em 1950, agora Ariadne da Jennifer Saint...

A família de Ariadne é uma as mais interessantes da mitologia grega, e eu fico impressionada como nenhum autor traçou essa linha, principalmente em retellings feministas. Ariadne é neta de Helios, o próprio Sol, e Zeus, mas também é sobrinha de Circe e prima de Medea, duas das maiores bruxas da mitologia grega.

Ela e Medea tem muitos paralelos, inclusive, ambas são princesas de seus respectivos reinos que se apaixonam por um herói, traem seu povo por eles, ajudando-os com seus respectivos problemas, apenas para serem abandonadas. E nenhuma delas é punida pelos deuses em suas vinganças (a da Ariadne é mais um headcanon do que mitologia mesmo, mas detalhes), alguma justiça finalmente.

Eu li algumas reviews e umas pessoas não gostaram da parte de Naxos. Nessa versão, completamente nova, existe um Rei e uma Rainha em Naxos, a ilha que deveria ser de Dionísio. Quando Teseu e Ariadne chegam lá eles são recebidos pelos dois em seu palácio, e até mesmo ficam em um dos maiores quartos, porém em uma cena digna das bacantes, elas matam o rei, e Ariadne está lá inclusa, e Teseu fica enojado com aquilo e a abandona. Honestamente? Gostei. Porém como o livro é pelo ponto de vista dele, a parte interessante acaba por aí, e ele acaba sendo a vitima. Teseu ia abandonar ela de qualquer jeito, sinceramente, isso apenas deu um motivo, e eu SEI que essa Ariadne colocaria uma maldição pra ele esquecer de trocar as velas, confio na kinga.

É isso, essa é minha última review gigante desse ano, eu ME RECUSO, preciso dar uma pausa longa.

ddavare's review against another edition

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adventurous challenging tense slow-paced

3.25

I think this was an excellent retelling of Theseus.  Specifically, another side of the story between Theseus and Ariadne, in particular.  It gave me a new perspective of the character by giving an excellent origin story that explains his more known character traits.  I'm so much more sympathetic to this well known Greek mythology character.  I only gave it 3.25 stars because the Crete, Minotaur story was dragged out for so long that I was struggling to get through it.

tintinintibet's review against another edition

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4.0

TKMD was a recommendation from my 6th grade teacher, and re-reading it 30+ years later I suspect we each (me now, me then, teacher) read and/or remember a very different book. Maybe I’m overthinking this like my daughter claims I’m doing with Harry Potter (as that story turns super dark in book 5 The Order of the Phoenix). Guilty: there’s more subtlety, nuance, gray, and color in TKMD; there’s more us-vs-them, flight-or-fight, manufactured outrage and sadistic evil in Harry Potter.

msimock's review against another edition

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adventurous mysterious medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0