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The Bachelor Auction by Rachel Van Dyken

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3.0

I’m going to be gracious and give this 3 stars because there were a few cute and funny parts and it held my attention enough to finish, but it’s not good. The Cinderella theme was over played. There were some moments that just never made sense. I thought by the end I’d understand why that was said, but never did. And I needed her to stick up for herself more... have a little more self respect than to put up with some of the stuff Brock said/did.

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4.0

Rating: 3.5 stars

This was a very unique take on a Cinderella retelling. I've read other books by this author and really enjoyed them, so when I saw the audio available, I figured I would read it. I liked both of the main characters. It's dual POV and the narrator switched as well. I did have a hard time focusing on the story and seemed to keep getting distracted while listening. Overall, I did like this book and will be continuing the series. I recommend if you are looking for a contemporary romance take on a Cinderella retelling.

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4.0

Modern day Cinderella meets Beauty and the Beast.

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5.0

If you’re like me and saw the title and author of this book, you think this is going to be a lighthearted, entertaining, sometimes laugh out loud fluffy story. And just like me, you’d be wrong. This is a modern day twist on Cinderella but oh so much more than that. The emotions in this book are heavy and the meat of the story is more serious than I ever expected and that took me by surprise.

Having only read a couple of books by Ms. Van Dyken, I’d her writing is just as good here as it is in the others I’ve read. She, through her characters, is really funny and the banter among characters is priceless. I literally laughed out loud, often. We have the quintessential meddling older grandfather, the over-the-top mean sisters and the abrasive yet hilarious sweet twin younger brothers in the supporting cast. And you’re going to want to hold on to those laugh-out-loud moments to get you through the seriously painful moments.

When we first meet Brock, he seems a bit stuffy and bred for obligation. He is quite the opposite of his younger, wild and carefree twin brothers. We get a quick glimpse of the real Brock when he meets Jane for the first time. As we see more of him in the story, we find the Brock that is buried so far under guilt and pain that he’s pretty much just a big jerk. Jane is going through her own personal issues but sets those aside to try to bring the real Brock back to life. Their banter, when he’s not being a complete jerk, is quite entertaining. He slowly opens up to her and leans on her strength to finally be free. We are taken on a bit of a wild ride to get to the end of the Cinderella story but it was worth every second of it. While there was some angst, it wasn’t heavy – maybe because Brock and Jane’s pain was so palpable we didn’t need any additional angst.

We get some foreshadowing on the twins stories – no idea whose will be next but those stand to be just as powerful as this story because they are further hidden than Brock was.

This is hands down one of my favorite stories of the year and an absolute must read.

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Funny crazy family.

chroniclesofabookreader's review against another edition

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4.0

THE BACHELOR AUCTION is a Cinderella-inspired story that manages to capture the whimsical nature of a fairytale, the sweetness of love, and the RVD factor of added sexiness. While reading you'll find little references to the classic story, and it's both charming and fun to experience it in this loosely-based adaption. But most of all, RVD makes it hers in every way she can and it's an enjoyable story from beginning to end.

This is a feel-good romance with a man forced into an unforgiving situation and the sweet woman who unwittingly crosses his path. Brock and Jane, brought together by the inconsiderate and aggressive people in their lives, had a forbidden attraction that sparked instantly, but was entirely unwelcome. The push-pull between the two and their inner conflict was delicious and satisfying. And can I mention the evil sisters? So many slaps needed for them. But Brock's brothers, on the other hand, were a great addition to the tale (and I'm hoping their stories will be on their way soon!).

So much imagination and invention went into this story to make it a modern-day Cinderella love story, but with it's own twist. RVD crafted a charming tale of a prince-like man and his hired maid that was spicy and well-written. It was almost a bit too sweet and long-winded near the end, but the sweetness fits perfectly for the kind of read it is. There is no angst and a lot of that happy love feel. I read it quickly and voraciously as it was easy to get into and a pleasure to read. THE BACHELOR AUCTION is a beautiful read with such a fun, engaging storyline--it is not one to be missed!

**Received an early copy via the publisher and NetGalley in exchange for an honest review**

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medium-paced

3.0


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3.0

This was an adorable spin on a Cinderella romance. Jane was the perfect mix of Cinderalla and modern woman. She was introverted enough that I could easily relate to her hatred of going out on the town, but not so shy that she didn't stand up for herself when push came to shove. She even owns a cleaning company - a great modern twist on the theme - and loses a shoe along the way.

The downside was Brock (I think). The hero was great. I loved him and his family, although they got a bit over the to towards the end. It was the names that did this book in for me. Even by the end I couldn't keep the brothers apart. All with similar names that start with B, and we meet them within pages of each other. The similar names just sort of merged into one giant Wellington son instead of one older brother and two younger twins. I made a cheat sheet half way through so I could keep them straight. I didn't like it.

The story was a lot of fun. There were some sad moments as both Brock and Jane deal with their past and how it has changed the way they cope with the present. There are happy and laughing moments that I didn't want to see end. But the whole brother name thing just hung over it all.

I'm hoping that book two helps to separate the brothers a little more for me because they were all a lot of fun and I really want to see how their separate lives all intertwine as they find their love.

*This book was received in exchange for an honest review*

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5.0

4.5 Hearts
The Bachelor Auction is the first book in the Bachelors of Arizona series. I couldn't be a bigger fan of Rachel Van Dyken if I tried. I've read all of her books and I love them all for very different reasons. The Bachelor Auction is a little different Rachel book. Yes, this is a modern take on Cinderella but it's also more sexual and more adult than some of her other books.
Brock is trying to run his family business. He's thirty-five years old, but he's never let himself have fun. That's what his twin brothers are for. They are fun, crazy, womanizers who make Brock's life a living hell sometimes. Their grandfather comes up with a scheme to help the company with their publicity issues. A bachelor auction and Brock is the first to be auctioned off. On a rare night when he's not the usual boring Brock, he meets a sweet, beautiful stranger, Jane. She breaks her shoes and is whisked away by Brock. She can't help but be instantly attracted to him. His smell, his face, the caring way he handles her. And the way he gets her new shows. Really pretty, expensive shoes. But it's too much to take and she runs. Brock needs to find her. There's something about her that got under his skin and he needs to see her again. Jane runs a cleaning company and is hired for a job out of town. Just when she almost forgets about Brock he show ups where she's working. And he's not leaving. Their attraction grows more and more every day. He's sexy and has a dirty mouth, but he's no prince. So, Jane has to deal with sexy Brock, an ass, a cock and Brock's crazy twin brothers. Brock wants Jane. More than anything he's ever wanted, but he's about to be auctioned to the highest bidder. How is this his life? Being back in his childhood home is bringing back memories he doesn't want to face. Can Jane help him move on? Will Brock go through with the auction and leave Jane behind? I enjoyed this story. Brock and Jane have hilarious banter and I loved the twins. I might be looking forward to their stories more than I was looking forward to this one!

"You know, once you go Brock you never go back."
"It would be bad enough if there were only one of you, but there's two. Literally."

"Good, then you have two minutes to remove every stitch of clothing on your body and meet me in my room."
"What, no please?"
"Now. Please."

"Only a complete idiot would walk out of this room right now."
"Which is why it's so surprising you're still here."
"Cute."

"I thought so."

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5.0

5 Bachelor Stars

Are you a Rachel Van Dyken Fan? If you answered YES… then READ THIS BOOK…
I loved The Bet so much I have read parts out to my hubby.

This book for me had that kind of feel good, can’t get enough read to it. Even with the audio!!

Brock is the oldest brother who has twin brothers he seems to have to keep in line.. Only that’s a full time job that well doesn’t work frankly. Not only that but his grandfather is just as nutty. Which I LOVED!

Jane, just Jane takes care of her two older sisters because frankly they are useless. What you were thinking it!!
They walk all over her, and Jane feels like she has to keep the family together because that’s what her father would have wanted. Only I don’t think me meant for her to be taken advantage of.

When Brock sees Jane.. well let’s just say his life will never be that same again. And neither will her.
Lordy be this was a funny book. The wit and the sarcasm are awesome. I loved Brock's brothers, they had me laughing or chuckling throughout. .And don’t get me started on the Rooster or the Donkey.. haha

I loved the narrators!! Perfect voices to bring these characters to life in my ears I tell you.
I could be more pleased, an audiobook I will be listening to again let me tell you.


*You don't have to like my review but its 100% my opinion, and I am allowed to have it.*