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Unwanted by Marley Valentine

nomomstayandread's review

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5.0

This was hard. We have two men from rocky beginnings who fell madly in love when they were kids and one of them went down a road the other couldn't follow. After a few years apart, Frankie's brother has a medical issue and gets called home in a hurry where he gets to see what was left behind when he fled town. Arlo isn't over being abandoned and things are rocky at first.

This was lovely. The book was full of hard stuff but these two were endgame from the reunion on. Arlo gave Frankie a hard time for leaving but that was the only way he could save himself. I liked seeing these two come back to each other as the new and improved versions of themselves because they both deserved it.

I'm very much looking forward to more books in this series.

galleytrot's review against another edition

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  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

4.0

READ: Jul 2024
FORMAT: Audio

ENTERTAINMENT VALUE: 4 / 5 ⭐️
TECHNICAL / PRODUCTION: 3.75 / 5 ⭐️
FINAL – OVERALL: 4 /5 ⭐️

Based on the synopsis I had expected this book to be heavier than it was, but with the exception of some early angst, things tended to take a more hopeful and optimistic tone. A lot of other stories might have dragged out the will-they-won't-they beyond my patience, and while this one might have benefited from just a dash more of it, it also never frustrated me, which was refreshing.

dkhurley's review

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emotional hopeful sad tense
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

reading_rommance's review

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3.0

This was a fun, exciting read. However, it was a little intense at times. I also felt like we didn't get enough time in the past, so when Arlo and Frankie met again and fall back into old pattens, it was a little out of left field. I enjoyed following Arlo's struggle with sobriety and his new friend's struggle with the same. Overall, I did love their love and I loved the friendship among the crew even more. 2.5/5 spice levels.

Notes: Found family, addiction

theenthucutelet's review

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challenging emotional hopeful sad medium-paced

4.25

tagoreketabkhane31's review

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3.0

*Actual raiting: 3.5/5 stars*

The third Marley Valentine book that I have read, and I am starting to see why a lot of folks who read indie queer romances go for her books. They are full of angst (what can I say, I like my drama in books) and the characters have to work through a litany of issues that don't make for light reading (though this was a short novel so it helped) and one of my favorite things about her is not only does she provide distinct main characters, but her supporting cast of characters are also carefully fleshed out.

This is a second chance romance story that is between Frankie and Arlo. Frankie is a supporting character from her earlier novel Ache, and Arlo is the other main character in the novel. Because this is the first book in a new series, the supporting cast have some storylines begin to play out in this book, but thankfully they do not take away from the main focus of the story that is Frankie and Arlo.

The story centers around addiction, and the constant work that goes into staying on the path of recovery and sobriety. The story takes place one year after Ache, and it has been four years since Frankie has left LA and his foster siblings (including one blood brother) behind to espcae to Seattle. Four years in LA, Frankie had dropped off Arlo in rehab, and never contacted him again (though he stayed in contact with Clem, his foster sister). An accident with his younger brother on the football field that leaves him deaf permanently brings him back to LA to face the family he left behind and the relationship as well. Arlo, for his part, is worried because of the unresolved feelings that he has about Frankie, and how he grapples with them along with his fear that he might relapse again because his proximity.

It's by no means a light read, and indeed the issues of addiction, sobriety and disability are played out with these characters as they adapt. There are also subtextual issues of homelessness, foster care, found family, and also about communication and self ownership - of being able to take ownership for actions and striving to do better. Overall, its a great story with an even more powerful message.

There was a minus start for the usage of baby (I don't care, it is an automatic deduction), and also for how some of the tougher conversations were handled by Frankie and Arlo. I'm a conflict resolution practioner, and seeing people continue the avoidance model, even in literature, will always drive me up a wall.

Give the book a try folks, and I am curious about the other books in the series as they follow the other characters.

mlb16's review against another edition

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emotional reflective sad medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.75


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jankben's review against another edition

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emotional hopeful sad medium-paced

3.0

I decided to give the audio version a try since I couldn't finish the print version. I did listen to the whole book. I still had the same reaction to the extended length of time for their estrangement. Even if you accept that it was necessary for the main couple to experience personal growth separately, that was no excuse for Frankie to abandon his family, especially his brother.

readwithvic's review against another edition

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fast-paced

3.0

smutup's review

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emotional medium-paced

4.0