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Losers: Part I by Harley Laroux
adventurous
mysterious
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
I love Harley so so so much…but this was a no. I was so excited for this book and I just feel it was a little rushed. The plot wasn’t really present, but I could care less about that. The smut just….wasn’t that good. I mean, it was pretty good, but compared to Her Soul to Take, The Dare, and Her Soul for Revenge….. it was okay. I was expecting so much more for this book and couldn’t wait to read it, but it fell flat. The writing felt crammed. I understand she was under a lot of pressure to get this novel out, but I wouldn’t have minded her taking a bit longer for a better book. I understand it takes time to write, and I was willing to wait. There were maybe 2 or 3 scenes that peeked my interest, but the rest were just meh. I’m praying the next book is better. Also, quick disclaimer: while Haley writes “bodily fluids” in the warning, she did not specify piss. No actually scenes, just a couple mentions. Personally not my thing, just thought I’d let you know.