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A Mortal Song by Megan Crewe

raeanne's review against another edition

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3.0

Mortal Song hooked me with the interesting premise, following an Unchosen One in Japan. There were a lot of ups and downs, never sinking below “Okay” or rising above “Better”, leaving it an average 3 stars.

It was an easy and quick read, but I was never fully immersed. I was aware that I was reading and of what I was reading the whole time. There’s plenty of action and problems to keep it moving, but I think I’d liked it if that was sacrificed to flesh it out more.

I will say though, only some issues were felt while reading. The rest came in when I sat down to write this review and the more I thought, the more I realized.

After it all, Mortal Song was worth reading for me but I wouldn’t call it satisfying. It’s complete and I’m moving on. What I really have a hankering for now though is something more authentic and immersive. I don’t think I’ll find another quite like Mortal Song though, so it’s too bad I didn’t like it more. I certainly wanted to.

The beginning was interesting but had rough spots. Mostly tied to characters who should know this shit acting dumb so someone can explain it to the readers and repetition. Did you guys know The Seer’s prophecies are vague and obscure? Like really? And she hasn’t changed! OMG!

It got better once they were around humans to play the audience substitute.

Unfortunately, there is one glaring plot hole I caught right away, one “Uh, when was this decided?” missing piece, and a “why didn’t they think of or mention that?” misstep. It is possible to ignore it but it sticks out memorably after reading. Of course, I wasn’t immersed either so it didn’t kill my enjoyment as much as usual.

What kept me going throughout it all was Sora and her Unchosen One story line. But that didn’t last all the way through. It became a sort of mish-mash of Chosen One sub-tropes which ends up being kinda-sorta-not-really different. This along with more rushing and logic leaps like the beginning is what really brought the ending down.

While I enjoyed the action in between, it was a bit much. A Mortal Song could’ve used less of that and more depth to bring it to life. I wanted to get lost in this world, but couldn’t, like music that’s out of tune.

I know this sounds allll negative and I hate that because it was enjoyable. I liked how they thought their way through the myriad of problems and obstacles. I loved Sora and Keiji, separate and together. There was a twist I didn’t see coming, which I obviously can’t reveal. The reasons behind the ghostly invasion and its leader were perfect that again, I can’t discuss. Music was important to Sora and the kami with it being laced throughout and was rather touching. It was great meeting the different kinds of kami and mythological creatures.

World Building:

I don’t want to call it shallow, but it didn’t go deep enough for me. It focuses on action and isn’t very descriptive. I wasn’t immersed; I was aware that I was reading and of what I was reading the whole time.

Wouldn’t there be more to it? What about the origin stories and famous kami? No thoughts on how wrong the modern depiction is of kami? Or is it right? Wouldn’t the humans ask questions like “How true are the legends? The animes?”

Crew did her research. It does show throughout the novel and in her author's note but I still felt something was missing.

It’s interesting for those that aren’t familiar with Shinto and kami but doesn’t have the same soul.



Characters:

A Mortal Song focuses on Sora’s character progression and inner turmoil amid the action. I liked Sora and the issues she was grappling with. It was a great journey from beginning to end. I appreciated her romantic problems and thoughts on the matter. However, she’s marred by plot twists that make her another special snowflake and ruin the initial premise I loved.

Keiji was a loveable, adorable geek. Behind Sora, he was my favorite. However, that’s hardly surprising given how one-dimensional the kami were, which was on purpose but disappointing.

Chiyo was a major disappointment. She seemed really human at first and became the Chosen Magical girl stereotype. She should’ve been fleshed out more. Not only would it have been enjoyable, but it’s add balance and reinforce the themes of A Mortal Song. Takeo was kami too, but didn't have the same characterization issues as her.

Decent read I don’t regret but it wasn’t what I was expecting or ultimately looking for.

If it sounds interesting, I’d preview it to check it out. Buying an e-copy, reading it on Kindle Unlimited, or borrowing it would be a great idea if we’re similar readers, though the cover is gorgeous.

I also think if you don’t like Sora, you won’t like A Mortal Song.

ladybugz410's review against another edition

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4.0

I enjoyed this book. Was really different from the things I usually read. I liked the story line and the characters.

lolasreviews's review against another edition

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4.0

I received a copy in exchange for an honest review

It was the cover that caught my attention and the blurb that convinced me I had to read this one. I was so happy I managed to got a review copy from netgalley. I really enjoyed A Mortal Song, it was an unique read with how the story is told from someone who would normally be a side character. It took place in Japan and there was some Japanese mythology in there as well. There was action, magic and a saving the world plot line, but it's also more than that. It's about how power and strength can come in different shapes, finding out who you are and what being human is about.

A Mortal Song follows the story of Sora, who always thought she was a kami, but then she learns everything she believed was a lie. She's just a normal human and the people she thought were her parents aren't. It was very interesting to read about Sora her struggle with this. She has to deal with knowing her whole life was base don a lie, not having magic and just being human and everything that comes with it. I liked how this book turned things around, instead of the normal main character finding out she's special, we have a main character who thought she was special, and finding out she isn't. I really liked this.

This book is mostly Sora her journey, her mortal song as the title calls it. It's very fitting I think and the cover fits the book as well. I think we get to know Sora the most of all the characters as we only get her perspective, but that was fine with me. Sora was an interesting character and there's a lot of character change in this book. The side characters all were great too, although I would've liked to get to know them a bit better. From Takeo who has been Sora her friend since they were young. To Keji who was just a normal human who gets involved. Then there is Chiyo who is the real kami and who got switched with Sora at birth. And more. I also liked how the kami felt a bit off to human standards and how Sora eventually realizes this and how kami and humans are different. It was interesting. There is a bit of romance, but it really is just a subplot, I did like it and how it was handled. It's very subtle, but done well. I also liked how Sora handles things with the romance.

Then there is the story, the danger and Sora and her friends their journey throughout Japan to save their home. There are obstacles, doubts and difficult parts. The book kept my attention the whole time and I really enjoyed reading it. The pace was very well done. It is a bit of a longer book than I normally read at close to 400 pages, but the length was perfect for the story. I did think the ending was a tad rushed, it also seemed a bit too easily how things got solved in the end, but on the other hand I also liked how things were handled as it was a bit different. I also would've liked to see more of what happens afterwards or maybe a sort of epilogue, but that also might be because I got so involved in the story and wanted to read more about Sora and how she would adjust to life after everything that had happened in this book.

The world building isn't the focus of this book, but the world did came alive. We learn about the kami, their magic and tasks and mount Fuji. We get to travel through Tokyo and the surrounding regions with Sora and her friends. There are ghosts and demons and along the way they find out a bit more about ghosts and what works against them. I liked the focus on Japanese mythology that gave the book a unique feel. And I loved imaging how everything looked like.

To summarize: I really enjoyed this book! The book follows Sora her journey after finding out she isn't a kami, but just a normal human. I liked reading about her struggles and seeing her character change and find her own strength along the way. This kept my attention the whole time and the pace was well done. The ending felt a bit rushed and like things got fixed a bit too easily, but I also liked how things got handled. I just would've liked it to get a bit more dragged out around the ending. Sora is a great main character and I liked reading about her, the side characters are fun too although we get to know less about them and there's a bit of romance which was subtle, but well done. I also like the Japanese mythology and feel of the book. Overall this was a great read and I am glad I read it!

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3.0

3 stars

I received an e-ARC copy of A Mortal Song from the publisher and NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.

I wanted to love this book so bad. It had all the elements I liked. It had an interesting plot line and the world building made sense. I was really happy that the setting was in Japan and the cast was all Japanese. It’s also fantasy and the kami culture was interesting, especially because kami’s are real things. I especially thought that the blend of urban fantasy and mythology worked well.

I was really interested in Sora. The feeling of displacement and how does she fit into the only world she knows but is not really a part of. I also really liked Chiyo. She gets hit with the “you are a kami” punch and totally rolls with it. She is not afraid to try this thing and is never whiney about it. Sora and Chiyo are two sides of the same of coin and I liked the idea of how the two of them could be friends and maybe sisters.

The actual worse thing about the book was Kenji. I loathed that character. Every time he opened his mouth I wanted to punch him. He would figure something out and then blab about it. Sora would be unhappy at him and then think he was cute. I just couldn’t stand it. I couldn’t see any real reason for him, except to make Sora feel like the human world could be home because she fell in love with him. I didn’t like Kenji as a character or the romance.

Overall I liked but the book but I didn’t really connect to it. I kinda felt that I was in a Japanese anime and I never lost that feeling. I think that it is a me thing and I because I couldn’t get over it, I wound up coloring the whole book with it. I did enjoy the book but not as much as I could have.

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Writing is solid. The kami and Japanese culture richly imagined. There's nothing I can put a finger on specifically that I found wrong with the book, other than....it didn't quite hold my attention. It's a fine girl-centric tale, but Sora, the daughter of Mt Fuji's kami rulers thrust into role of savior when a demon attacks, felt very familiar. Quests were had, plot twists happened about who Sora really is, and there was even some romantic jostling around of partners, but it felt geared towards a much, much younger audience than mother-of-teenagers me. I do read YA so it wasn't that, it was more that the story itself wasn't told in a way I found fresh. So your mileage may vary. For folks interested in straight up younger YA who have no inkling about Japanese culture, this would be great.

drea_design's review against another edition

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4.0

It was a very interesting concept and original idea. I enjoyed reading this story and easily got invested in the well-being of the characters. Not quite the ending I was expecting. The story was so good that I expected the ending to totally blow me away. Unfortunately, I was left wishing for more. Don't get me wrong! I enjoyed this book quite a bit. It was very hard to put down. I was just hoping for an epic battle of wits to finish off such a captivating story.

This was provided to me free from the author in exchange for a fair and honest review.

kellsway's review against another edition

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4.0

Wow!!

What a splendid read. I laughed and cried for my heroine. This was such a refreshing change from the usual troupes. I definitely recommend this one to all.

mandygris's review against another edition

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3.0

Fantasy stories often are focused on regular people who find out they have incredible powers. People who turn out to be inhuman in part, god-touched, or bonded with otherworldly relics.

The reason why I like A Mortal Song is because it reminds us that humans can be heroes because of their humanity and not despite their humanity.

It is a good conversation and reminder to consider that no power comes without an entrance price, and that this responsibility changes you.

writingwwolves's review against another edition

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4.0

I was sent a Kindle copy of A Mortal Song from Megan herself to read and review before it's release. I'd been really excited about this book and I'm definitely not disappointed with what I've read.

It was really refreshing to read a book that wasn't set in England or America, as a lot of the books I read are, so being taken to another part of the world (one I'm curious about) and being immersed in its mythology was really fun.

I really like that the main character in the book wasn't 'the chosen one' as I don't believe I've read a book with this character layout before - it was interesting to see a story like this from the perspective of a character that wasn't expected to save the day (or to do much else to be honest). I enjoyed all of the characters, even the bad ones, and none of them were over- or under-complicated. At times it would have been nice to know how Chiyo felt about what was happening, as she seemed to adapt quite easily to what was happening around her, but Sora's perspective worked well enough (and I'm glad the story wasn't told from Chiyo's perspective).

The story itself was original and the mythology behind it was different from anything I've read before. None of it was over-explained or over-complicated, and there wasn't a single time when I was confused about what something meant or what someone was supposed to be. The pace worked really well for me and there was never a time when I felt bored or tired of the book.

Although I've only given this 4 stars I will place this under my favourites list. That one star has only been lost because part of me feels there could have been a little more to this book - maybe the writing could have been less simplistic OR maybe the same plot could have been made into more than one book; this would have meant more detail and I would LOVE to know that I was going to be reading another book at some point in the same 'world'.... any chance of some novellas Megan? I've definitely been left wanting MORE.

The awarded four stars come from the fact that I loved the original plot, loved that 'the chosen one' wasn't the main focus of the story, loved the setting and connected with Sora. I did shed a tear in the final chapter and so much of me wants to know MORE about what happens next. I might have to read it again immediately.

A massive thank you to Megan for sending me a copy of the book, I am unbelievably grateful and honoured to have had the privilege (and I will definitely be buying a physical copy of the book at some point).

momwithareadingproblem's review against another edition

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4.0

I received an eARC of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of this review.

A Mortal Song
by Megan Crewe is an impressive tale that blends Japanese mythology with that of the urban world. Sora is the daughter of the kami rulers at Mt. Fuji. She’s been sheltered, loved and immersed in their beliefs. When a demon with an army of ghosts overruns the palace on Sora’s 17th birthday, she escapes with her best friend and loyal guard Takeo, but as she leaves Mt. Fuji behind her powers dissipate and she finds out the world she loves is not the world she belongs to.

I thoroughly enjoyed this book! I’ve always enjoyed a good urban fantasy, but Crewe blends her story with Japanese mythology and I LOVED this element. It brought a magical quality to the story that many urban fantasies lack. Sora is a character that is easily relatable and my heart broke for her over and over again. She’s strong, dedicated, and loyal yet flawed and insecure tying the human world with that of the kami’s perfectly.

The plot is fairly simple. Sora with Takeo and some new found friends must find a way to save the kami from the demon before Fuji erupts. I liked that the plot was easy to follow as I’m unfamiliar with the mythology present in the story. I decided to spend some time on my own researching while I read, though this is NOT necessary, the author just peaked my interest. There is plenty of action and problems along the way to move the story forward. The fight scenes with the ghosts were particularly interesting. They are well written and it was easy to picture it in my mind as a fluid scene while reading.

Overall I really enjoyed Sora’s story. It’s a standalone, which is hard to find these days. Featuring plenty of action, suspense with each rumble from Fuji, and even a little romance, I highly recommend it!